All Comments on 'All or Nothing'

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LoveMenLoveSexLoveMenLoveSexover 9 years ago
A little freaky!

I really enjoyed the switching viewpoints in this, and your care and attention to what *he* thinks and what *she* thinks, both with their own voices, both with rounded characters' voices. I'd personally love to see this explored, one or both pushing at the needs/requirements of the other and if emotion can get a look in when sex is the main goal. Great work!

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