by satyricon.21
I was worried in the last chapter when you mentioned that there were changes coming. I like the direction the story seems to be going. Uli is my favorite of the women. Luke is more human now. Keep up the good work.
I enjoyed part 1 very much, and was enjoying part 2, but...yes, it was starting to be formulaic. Plot then hot sex then plot works fine with me, what I really needed was to know that Luke wouldn't find a new harem in city after city after city, who all find, surprisingly, that they're not jealous of one another.... I have LOVED the way you've changed the story, both with "non-Luke" scenes, and especially with the development between Luke and Uli. Little hints of a special relationship between them were there earlier, but I really was surprised and pleased that you are developing the story this way. The conversations between those two in the Ardennes were beautiful.
I can't wait to read the rest!