All Comments on 'All Tied Up...Sort Of'

But way too short!

Total let down as an ending to what could have been a great long seriesThe five vote is for your writting skills and this would have been a hot but too short rape story. I feel betrayed.

This is a really good story. there needs to be more to the story please tell me there is. My dog has been laying next to me reading it to. i know that sounds weird but she can actually read and comprehend.

The story was really good. What happens next?

The story leads us to believe that she got bred, but then it is cut off for some reason. It is rather impossible to give a decent rating for this one because of this.

But You really need to add a chapter 3. This story just isn't complete.

OMG! Plz continue! Mayb she becomes preg and becomes a slave for him?

Enjoyed both, but if she is really so worried about not wanting his little bastard then their is a very easy solution. Looking foward to the next.

hope not this is so good, i want to know what happens