All Comments on 'Allahdeen'

I was amazed by this tale. It's a wondrous retelling. I would like more tales of Allahdeen.

can we have more?

Your forte is fantastical tales, you're a male reincarnation of Scheherazade! Your weakness is in the proper use, often lack of use, of commas. Your tales, when set in modern times, do not rise to the same levels.

I will endeavor, in the future, to make use of commas more often. I know my grammar sucks, but i hope the stories smooth that over a little. Thank you for your kind words.

This was a wonderful tale until the sudden ending. She releases her Jinn, is afraid of dealing with the demon, and suddenly we find her in modern times running an antique store.

In thinking I can guess the transitions, however, for such a good story I was hoping for more closure. Maybe another chapter could backfill the empty spots?

Otherwise well done!

Wonderful but I feel I missed the denouement