All Comments on 'Allie's First Threesome'

by whoruwhoami

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hanna_ahanna_aabout 14 years ago
Good thing you tagged it "Lesbian"

... although it is not quite true. But otherwise I probably should have missed this nice reading. Intelligent and sensual, and even the hetero parts are quite tasteful.

Jimbabwe88Jimbabwe88about 9 years ago
For being in the Lesbian section, it's okay.

Don't get me wrong, this story is fantastically written. Your erotica is very well descriptive and you have heart to it. It's just that this story should be in the Group Sex section. I enjoyed the first two chapters a lot since it was only Robyn and Allie, but this last part wasn't much of my liking. I'm glad Robyn and Allie are still together, and while I should have seen this coming since neither woman claimed to be lesbian, I guess i had hopes that they would realize that they ARE the only two people for each other. Like I said, though, it's really well written.

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