All Comments on 'Allison & Rick Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
lovin this

....wish i was 18 again... would be a painter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Are you going to continue this series?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You need to proof read your stories.

You need to proof read your story. They got undressed twice in the same scene. Very distracting. This would of been a good story otherwi.

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