by Boxlicker101
Try involving additional people especially if they walk in and join in incest is always good.
Great story, the details are fresh and the pacing is perfect. You manage to convey the scene nicely without cliche. The story also is just the right length. Keep up the good work.
First, please don't do as anonymous requested and include incest... it's so nice to find a great author who can do without!
"Allison's Ass" was a treat... both as a writer myself and as a woman who truly enjoys anal as much as she does. I have some new ideas for my next venture based on your story and I have to admit, I would really love to find a young stud to teach!
I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks for sharing them with us!
Enjoyed the way your words seduced the reader like Jake was seducing that ass. Looking forward to more.
I, too, absolutely love eating a clean-shaven pussy. And I, too, prefer anal sex over vaginal sex, so long as the girl is disease-free, because it's a birth-control issue and I'm not a big fan of condoms. So, I loved this story! It really hit the target with me.
I loved everything about the timing & rhythm of the action in this story... if such a person exists, Allison's ass is indeed fortunate! I wish I could get paid to enjoy a co-worker who serviced me with such great sucking & anal fucking - two of my very favorite things! Is Jake available???
Loved the story. Well written and edited very well. Would like to have known just how young Jake is though.
I had older women who let me fuck them in the ass and really enjoy it. Especially since I am quite hung, it the utmost pleasure, when both enjoy it, outstanding.