All Comments on 'Alone at the Bar'

I fail to see how exhibitionist and voyeur fits this story. Not very good in whatever category. Very bland story. Cheesy conversation. Very uninspiring sex scene.

1 star

DragonRider55

The story was nice, but a little too rushed at the end. Would love to see more of your work

I agree - every time I get to the end of a story I can't wait till the end : ) since that's what I was working toward. Next one I'll work on slowing down my scene a bit.