All Comments on 'Alpha Bravo Team Ch. 01'

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Anonymousover 12 years ago

nice

Nice to see you back. I can`t wait to see the changes to the story. I have been waiting for the end of this story for awhile. Hope to read more soon. Love all your work.

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MizT over 12 years ago

First Chance

to read this story. I don't know when it originally posted but I either missed it or it posted before I joined. Either way I'm glad you are re-posting because it gives myself and others a chance to read it for the first time.

I'm already curios as to what happens next. Good luck w/the future rewrites and I'll be watching for the next installment.

cantfightfate over 12 years ago

Glad this story is back.

I liked it the first time around but I'm looking forward to the new and improved version.

Anonymousover 10 years ago

Interresting

I'm not sure where this is going but, so far so good.

rightbank over 8 years ago

I am told this is the "new and improved" version

but I have no idea what I just read or where it is going.

jkthekat over 8 years ago

This could be fun!

Keep it up kitten! Good start.

Anonymousover 8 years ago

1 line last page = 1 star

DarToon 11 months ago

Hooked me! Looking forward to reading all your works.

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Hey: I'm sorry about chapter two of Captive Angel being posted before chapter one. There was a paragraph or two that needed editing and I turned it back in to those who run this place. It should be out soon. Also. If there are any of my books you would like reported just tell...

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