All Comments on 'Amanda and I'

that was great for your first story. it flowed, well written. please continue

Please write more.

Your story flowed very well The set up took me I can't wait to see what you do in chapter 2

Very sweet and pleasing, please write more, maybe more about these two. Id love to read about their future escapades.

So wet

Mmm, got me wet and I loved the pace... took me back to my college roomie and our friends!

Very distracting when you can't even keep the character names straight.

your story was sweet and sexy at the same time. please bring more

Have to write more with this pairing. Mayb an strap on can be used in your next continued story with Amanda & Nicole. Amanda takes Nicole's ASS.

Nice story. If it ends here great. If it continues, cool

You may want to read Colleen Thomas's piece on writing erotica for women. We know nothing about who they are as people and there's no build up at all. Meh.

I loved it. Great job the only thing is I wish it would have been me enjoying both of those pussies and cum in my mouth. Im so horny after reading this.

It could've developed more into a full-blown romance and sexual escapade with Nicole.