All Comments on 'Amanda Guesses Wrong'

I'll have to read this again tommorrow before I decide on a score. I was thinking the husband was just as much at fault because he appeared to want the divorce so much it was like he was happy it was ending. Then the house wasn't really up for sale. I'll get back to you later.

JPB you have a new twist in this story. Husband holds the line. Wife sees no options and caves. Now we need to keep our devices and vigilance in place. I don't know if we can trust this one. I'm just saying

Why would the husband take the wife back after she had already cheated with Rudy?

Seem's to be a major plot flaw

The husband took his wife's ultimatum and shoved it up her ass. No wimp or cuck here. Curious though. If she went on the date would she have cheated? I wasn't sure if that was established. It would be interesting for a sequel, to see if she keeps to the post-nup. Hmmm...

be prepared to act if the opponent calls, TK U MLJ LV NV

...and I am always glad when you turn away from those "wimp-gloryfying" stories you often write. Your talent is remarkable.

A small mistake seems to be in this story (unless I am mistaken myself):

Rob states " It was about fifteen years ago and it was all because of who I was and what I did before I got married." after you have his wife threaten him that "24 happy years" were perhaps going down the drain. Surely they didn´t date for 9 years before their marriage, right?

Good to that a potential cheating wife did not make a cuckold out of her husband.

I am glad there are some stories Were the husband stands is ground and wins.

More like this please authors

EXCELLENT STORY, No cockoldings or wimps here. Written for fiction but honestly its reality that makes it so great. This is exactly what would happen in real life. Kids gone, just the two of them to enjoy each other to the end... What I do not get.. he should have acknowledged he knew from Amanda and the phone call. The fact is she lied. he was right all along, she met someone and planned out a date. Not to mention her friend never did like him in the first place.. so how can she expect her husband to go along with anything. Excellent story.. hope there is another chapter or perhaps another story. great job as always

You kept the story moving straight ahead (without any pointless distractions about cars and such), the dialogue was crisp and believable, and you left it up to the reader to decide what the two people looked like... I'm pretty sure this is the first story I've read where I didn't know if the woman was a C or DD.

Very well written and executed.

I enjoyed the story, no wimps, I always look forward to any story from the master writer. Thank you.

I enjoyed reading your story. A good ending. Thank you for sharing it.

Thanks for the great little story

A fun read definitely worth five stars. I can't quibble with him taking her back after 24 years of marriage. However, it seems she succumbed out of fear of losing her marriage and not because she felt she was wrong. The recorded call did prove she regretted her plan and established that she didn't want to cheat without hubby's consent. But in the final confrontation she admits that she will still think about being with other men. I would love a second half to see if she can stick, but it is perfect as is.

... and this one is certainly no exception. I don't know what kind of "come to Jesus" realization that you've had but all I can say is "good on you, mate". I've always said your offerings were either great or horrible with very little in between and, lately, they have been great. Keep it up because, right now, you're not only the most prolific writer on this site but, also, the best.

he didn't back down and was ready to dump the wife. But she came to her senses in the end

The only way a cheating spouse can truly regain the trust of the spouse they cheated on is to agree to a divorce and total capitulation. They must walk away from the marriage and not take any of the marital assets. They forfeited them when the cheated. The couple could continue to cohabit or live separately. They could rebuild their relationship or not. In any case, the score would be zero zero. This is the only way to rebuild trust, from the ground up.

Pretty well written story about two long married people who have differing goals and wants. Good resolution to the conflict, but the only thing lacking was the emotions. The story is written from Rob's point of view and kind of reads like a contract. There are conflicts spelled out, but in a dry and matter of fact way. There is no angst, no sleepless nights, no anguish over losing the woman he professes to love more than anything. I have never met a man like that and suspect if I did, that he would be incapable of expressing love for a woman, maybe a mustang, but not a woman. LOL

Hubby stuck to his guns, didn't back down, and Wifey FINALLY came to her senses.

5 Big Stars.

Good read as always and I liked the way he chose divorce to throw a monkey wrench in their plans. If it were me though, I'd keep the phone recorder hooked up...just saying.

Different take on the cheating wife scenario and I like different.

The one point I might make is that any woman that would consider having an affair and actually goes so far as to suggest it rather than actually just do it is on the rare side.

It took me four tries to find one I could completely trust, oddly she is the naughtiest one of the four. But she is naughty mostly just for us, not for others. Note I said, "us."

Good story, thanks.

MGM

5*

So where is the rest of the story?

Just to clear the air...she was going on a date with Rudy. Rudy was going to take her to a swinger's club meeting. What do you think they do at those meetings, pray the Rosary?

There was mention of other men waiting for her at the "meeting". That was going to be some date.

JPB, I always like your writing, it is just your endings that leave me less than thrilled sometimes. But not this time. A 24 year marriage was saved with both having confidence in the future. It isn't so much a BTB vs wimp thing as it is human nature to want 1) a positive ending and 2) the good guy to win. When the guy "wimps out", you get neither. But in this story, you achieved both.

So I am giving you a solid 5 stars and hope you can think up some more!

A JPB reconciliation story with 5***** from me. My question remains sequel?

How exactly did her meeting with the "single swingers" happen, did they only talk or was there some sampling done?

Also at the end it seems like she's trying to get back on his good side but there isnt even a final line from him saying he would accept. I guess he did? but it's still unclear.

Don't trust the bitch if she's been wanting to screw around for 24 years or even 5 years. She's going to do it sooner or later pre-nuptial or not. Cheers!

because our hero had his wife figured out and stuck to his guns. Sally was an interesting character. Usually the subversive friend is a totally malevolent force. In this case Sally turned out to be a real friend. Just as likely, in most scenarios the heroic husband would have appeared at the restaurant and confronted the man, the paralegal, thereby making the situation even worse. All's well that ends welI, I guess.

I can't wait for a update!

The last time she brought it up, he TOLD her that he would divorce her if she even brought it up again.

She brings it up again, TELLS him she going on a dtre whether he likes it or not, and tells him if he can't accept it he can divorce her.

And she's somehow surprised at his reaction?

Creeper, he signed on the "I accept" line, that his acceptance.

Well Told. Looks to me as if she just signed away her half of the house and any investments they have.

I am not sure why writers always ruin their stories like that. When they have a perfect story going, I never understand why they HAD to purposefully ruin it by doing some half-assed turn like that in their story flow...

Thanks for sharing.

Fighting, she never went on the date with Rudy, maybe met him at Sally's or something.

Ego, she didn't bring it up right away, he said it was after they were married 5 years, so I guess the 15-year comment should have said 19.

Drbeamer, I don't see where she admits she'll still think about being with another man, obviously she realizes the possibility, that's why she put those provisions in. But she obviously realizes that to keep her marriage (which she wants), she'll just have to suppress those urges. And who knows how many good years she has left, once she no longer "has the goods" it will all be moot.

There is certainly some ring familiararity to this for me.

A good story and wish that real life would imitate the art...

Another page turner JPB. This would differently be a case of trust but verify for hubby with the major focus being on verify.

Thanks................wonderful. :-)

I enjoyed it, thanks for posting!

Amanda brought up screwing someone else continually, and Rob tried to make it clear that he wanted nothing to do with it. The story has a happy ending, but Rob needs to be well aware that he should keep his eyes open. Keep the phone tap, and increase surveillance. The desire to cheat will eventually return, she's only learned that she can't do it if she tells Rob. Her only option now is to be sneaky. Her so called 'date' wasn't to sit on a park bench, it was to go to a full fledged fuck fest. She's already pulled the trigger on it. She told Rob that she wouldn't do it without his permission, but she fully intended to do it when he wanted no part of it. The shitstorm Rob gave her made her pull back. But--- that many years of wanting to fuck around. Can she just stop the desire? Good story, and thought provoking.

I got the feeling she had already met Randy and...some of the other guys. Why, because she seemed to know him and have seen/met a few other men. Sally refers to them as people they both know? Hmmm?

Anyway, a really good story Bob, Thanks again!

I was surprised that Hubby was NOT at Sarduccio's (or without some form of intelligence-gathering - a small voice-activated solid-state recorder in the bottom of her purse would do the trick)! Only other quibble is that I would have not agreed with her post-nuptial without passing it by my lawyer (and keeping her on pins & needles for another night!)

5*

There will be no other contact with Sally.

These stories satisfy the angry men readers I suppose, the ones that want to punish anyone who thinks about sex with anyone but them. I don't think there is a state in the U.S. that would allow a husband (or a wife for that matter) to sell a house unilaterally. Even a house purchased before the marriage (not true in this story I would gather) might have a spousal interest in play so that it could not be conveyed without both spouses signing the deed.

A bullying husband who is willing to see his own investment share go down the toilet could threaten to stop payment on the mortgage, but a decent attorney for the wife could prevent it and likely get a court to require the H to keep up the payments (or pay her enough in support to make them herself).

I have never quite understood why revenge fantasies are erotic to you guys, but I guess they are.

All the Cunts and faggots will hate this story of a husband with balls who would not put up with a selfish stupid wife. He was very fare about it. She didn't care about her husband only about what she wanted. So he gave it to her but she didn't like what her selfish ways would cost. Well too fucking bad. We all know how the Cunts and faggots would react if the shoe was on the other foot.

@rocketeer50

Contrary to what the swingers and cucks would have you believe, MOST of us married guys don't want our wives out fucking around on us. If YOU do, then that's on you. Hubby did what he had to do in this one. If Wifey was really hell-bent on fucking around, she would have gone for the Divorce instead of backpedalling and trying to save her marriage. This one had a happy ending... in JPB's own twisted style, of course.

I'll never understand why some... men... and I use that term loosely... actually want their wives to fuck other guys. I'm just not wired that way, I guess.

give up a lot of pussy and keep-em smiling, TK U MLJ LV NV

@ ID One part of bisex husbands, hid homosexuals and a new category one part of porno addict heteros want to watch their wives with others to sex. The swingers are porn addicts..........special live porn addicts too.

@ rocketeer50 You explained almost why so popular the Revenge Stories (BTB). The court system punishes the betrayed husbands to the cheating wives in the Wester Cultural World. We like to read (or write) about lucky and succesful ex-husbands who become winner and earn better, younger, more beautiful, faithful, good Mom new mates, wives or girlfriends.

Thanks, JPB, for another very entertaining free story. I really just wanted to state that I think it was a well-told story similar to something that I faced before in my life. The details are different, and the arc of real marital relationships are rarely as simple as this short story will allow, but the sense is the same as what happened in my life. This could very well have happened exactly as written. I particularly like the symmetry - she is faced, in the end, with deciding her own fate. Thanks again for the entertainment.

@Duna

It's not a punishment of the man to start a divorce property division with a presumption of a 50/50 split, regardless of fault. Interesting that you see the loss of the ability to toss out a miscreant wife and leave her penniless as a punishment to men.

Almost all of these revenge stories are of men getting revenge on the women.

Why is that? There aren't more cheating women than men.

@rocketeer50

You need to read this one again. This is NOT a revenge tale. This is about a husband doing what he has to do to ensure that his wife doesn't cheat on him. Or if she does, he will Divorce her. He wants to stay married to her as long as she stays faithful.

If you got your head out of your 4th point of contact, you might realize that.

Wifey gave Hubby the option for Divorce in this one during their initial conversation. She gave him an ultimatum. If you choose the option to let her fuck other men, then you are a willing cuckold.

If you choose to let your wife fuck around on you, then that's your thing. Just don't expect everyone else to agree with you. Some of us want to keep our wives to ourselves. Wedding Vows are there for a reason. "Forsaking All Others" is one of the most important, at least to me.

What difference will a post nuptials make? If she didn't honour her vows OR her husband before, why would she now? She will just be even more careful to not get caught in the future. She had already spent at least a few weeks setting up her "date" without hubby knowing, so she knows he can be fooled. I also doubt that she has been entirely faithful throughout the marriage. It's unlikely that she has had actual sex with another man, but there are levels of infidelity and she and her friend don't seem trustworthy in the slightest. Wife is too curious not to have experimented in some way. She also showed her contempt for hubby with her constantly pleading for permission to cheat, and then there was the ultimatum. No, not a keeper. Divorce her cheating ass.

@rocketeer50

You say that there are more cheating men than women. Recent studies(at least here in europe) show that there are more women cheating in the last 15 years than men. Also anonymous surveys show that some married women are more interested in extramarital sex than married men these days. That's not put down to women OR men. OBVIOUSLY these people are in a tiny minority and most people are honest and faithful, men and women alike. It's just saying that it seems that more men are becoming more family oriented that they were 20 years ago. Good to see the stereotype of men being mindless animals thinking only with their cocks is starting to be reconsidered. Yes, there are men, but also women, who are like this, but they are but a few. We are not all mindless sex maniacs as the popular media would have us think.

The vast majority of people are faithful, but, as I always say; cheaters should be publicly burned as an example to the rest!

Women try to work things out. Men are more interested in revenge.

krosis, unfortunately in your lack of training in statistics means you are accepting the interpretation written by a reporter even more scientifically illiterate then you are. Plus the inability to do semantic analysis and a failure to apply even the most basic of english language structure.

Among the women polled there was an almost statistically significant increase in those willing to admit they were considering committing adultery. If you read a story about a ferryboat, does that make you a ferryboat? Now replace the word 'read' with any of the following: dream about, talking about, ride upon, take a photograph? Doing any of those actions commit you to being a ferryboat?

I like the way FinalStand put it: "Standing in a church does not make me a Christian any more than standing in a garage will make me an automobile."

They just scheme to take advantage of men. And this bitch is doing just that!

I liked the story but the husband needs to watch her even closer now because of what she cooked up with the evil cunt Sally. The document is just to through him off until she can fuck him over when he gets relaxed. She's not going to drop it after 15 years. She will just cheat when the opportunity is there. It also sounds like she isn't very satisfied with their sex life.

Due to the marriage relationship a married couple cannot enter into a contract with each other, so a post-nuptial agreement is not enforceable.

So does she know that ?

Is this just to throw him off the track ?

Since the 1970s.

What a perceptive comment! I liked the ending. Mandy seemed a little too simple-minded to make the same kind of money Hubby made. I viewed the Sally character as someone who really wanted what was best for Mandy. Since Mandy was interested in experiencing another man/other men, Sally worked that angle. When Mandy wanted to save her marriage, Sally worked that angle. And, since Hubby wasn't really attempting to sell the house, he wanted to reconcile too. But only Sally and/or the paralegal knew how to accomplish that.

If you are going to use big words in a futile attempt to convince people that you are even semi-intelligent, the least you could do is learn to spell, and to use the proper words. And look up the difference between the words THEN and THAN. Most of your comments seem as is they are posted by a child trying to convince himself, and the world that he is a "big boy now, with a diploma and everything".

If you want to sound smart, then say something intelligent, instead of using the "word of the day" from your desk calendar.

almost predictable, so is life. didn't expect the quick ending as it is, it just didn't work for me. why was sally helping, why the paralegal. he didn't even have his attorney check it out, too many things undone.

So hubby dearest didn't actually want a divorce but didn't really have a specific action or goal to keep the divorce from going forward. Then the "bad" friend came up with the solution out of a clear blue sky. Not a very reasonable story line. It's illogical.

15 years of wanting another man/men?

and she loves her husband?

I dont see it, nor why he wants to keep her. Odds are good she has cheated in the past. he needs to check the kids DNA as well.

How many times had he been cut off for not agreeing to her scheme. Sally needs some retribution, not just for her part, so wifey sees there are consequences. This was just a little to cut and dried at the end, too many loose ends.

The fact that she maintained a friend who is a pervert is a major problem. How many wives have forced their husbands to part company with their single friends? All because the single life style was threatening to the married life style. In the minds of some people the more sex, the more partners the better. When you think about it, you have to wonder why? Fucking people like you are collecting baseball cards does not seem like a good idea. You expose yourself to a lot of risk for the cheap thrill (and maybe not so thrilling) of a fuck with a stranger. You expose yourself to the physical risks of disease and the possibility that the unknown person could be violent. You expose your self to the emotional risk that you have gotten involved with someone that may think you have started an emotional relationship with them, and they are not your cup of tea...You expose yourself to the risk of developing a reputation as a pervert, which you would in fact be! All for what? A little adrenaline? An orgasm or two? A big ego massage because someone actually wanted to fuck you? (Who is giving you that ego boost? A slut, or a player looking for a cum dumpster? How is that ego boost now?) On no level does swinging, cheating, playing make any sense? In fact, it is so clearly a bad idea that you would have to be emotionally disturbed or intellectually challenged to participate in such activities. In which case, your offended spouse is better off without you!

1 starts the procedure the other puts a freeze on the contract. TK U MLJ LV NV

JPB, this, yes, is a good story...In the end all were interested in saving the marriage...

He signed her agreement but she's still going to cheat. She has her mind made up that she can have her cake and eat it too. She's just going to plan better and make sure he never finds out. He should have divorced her.

but if he believes that Amanda will keep the agreement he is delusional. The marriage will never be a marriage again and I suspect that the marriage died 15 years prior when she first brought this stuff up.

Great writing Bob.

As intimate as sex is between long term couples, the fact she wanted sex with another is doom to the marriage.

Why did he want to keep her when he clearly isnt enough for her.

She will stay for support, but basically he is finacialy or emotionally blackmailing her into staying with him alone.

Thats not a marriage

I don't read much of his work anymore. Not that it's not good, I just like stories that end, and a lot of his don't.

I don't know why this one caught my eye but I'm certainly glad it did. 5*s for a well written, well thought out story, (with a great ending.) :-)

Add a second part. The part where she cheats and he keeps everything. And then he meets someone else and falls in love for ever. Show the cheating slut for what she really is-a cheating lieing coniving cunt of a woman.

also nullifies previous documents, Sucker. TK U MLJ LV NV

There will be no further contact, in any form, with Sally and her friends, especially those in the "lifestyle".

apparently, it is difficult for him to look past unrequited dreams and unfulfilled desires of his youth. they are still clouding his vision, making it difficult to separate the Amanda who turned him down, from the Mandy of today, who won't turn anyone away.

Although Sally may have had a good idea, it was her evil influence that caused him so much grief for the past 15 years. I have grown up with feminism and I believe in treating women like equals. To that end, I would treat her like any man that had intentionally meddled in my marriage and my life - I would hurt her badly. I would seek to deliver so much pain that she'd be gone from my life for good. If necessary I would destroy her.

And then husband will end up in jail for putting a case of whoop-ass on her lover, she'll be left home alone with everything and husband will have nothing.

Shit can her now or forever hold your peace.

Great tale but cut to an unenforceable ending too soon. That should have happened after the house offer and. It a lawyer. Still, a decent read.

He was a shithead in college,dippin' the wick wherever he could. Mandy was obsessed with playin' "Hide the salami" with one,or several new salamis,largely thanks to STD Sally who was kind of like a rooster in that her motto was,"any cock'll do". Since the story ended way to abruptly,not really offering an outcome,may I suggest one more paragraph in which the 3 stooges die in a car accident on the way to a Catholic church to make Confession. Good night,nurse! What a load of crapola!

it is either fold-e, or show-down. TK U MLJ LV NV

What's the point about "trying other men"?

If they're no better, you've risked or lost your marriage for nothing.

If they ARE better, then what? Are you going to leave your husband? Or are you going to stay with the lesser man? And if THAT'S the case, wouldn't it be better not to know?

And even with the agreement, taking her back should be contingent on her breaking off contact with Sally.

My problem with this story is the reconciliation, no person in their right frame of mind would take her back. She's spent 15 years trying to get him to let her fuck other men--not man--but men! I find it hard to believe that the undercover cum slut would just let it go. 15 years of plotting , entrapment and planning --no way! I'd divorce her! Her telling him she's going to do it no matter what and she has a date on Friday--was insane, this woman isn't wifey material, she wanted to be free to sample other dicks, I doubt her 15 year obsession with swinging didn't just disappear especially after all the planning.

You sound too reasonable for this site......bill

...has definately put it to the point.

I think the title says it all. I cannot tell you why I like it so but it had the wife cheating (sorta), the husband taking charge revenge (again sorta), and finally the make up. It is a nice little story.

I have no hope or charity Scotty

Please finish this story, another chapter or two. If it's out there, then which one is it?

it is still on her mind and in her heart.

Sally is still her friend.

and she is only going along with it because she loves the house, not her husband.

As others have said, she HAS to drop Sally, or all bets are off!

She'll let things cool down. Maybe for months. Maybe a year. But at some point she's going to sleep with another man. Sure as shooting. So he better accept that fact and make up his mind what he wants. Cuz the post-nup, without a notary signing off on it, was worthless. And since there's only one copy, I bet she tears it up behind his back. The only part of this that didn't feel right was his college years. TONS of women just want to hook up in college. So the idea that 2 women would put off all the rest of the girls in school was ludicrous. Maybe their friends or sorority sisters might avoid him, but college is a "target rich environment". He would have had no problem getting laid - a lot! And when he went to work after graduating? Gotta try out the merchandise before you buy so he would have been getting laid a lot there too. This marriage is a trainwreck. The divorce is coming down the tracks!

If she isn't kosher he gets an easy settlement in his favor.

drop the bitch...

Why the slutty friends never get some payback in this stories?

Amanda may or may not still screw up down the road, but if she does, Rob gets a great settlement.

I fucking don't like the ending...should have drop the bitch...

His signing the agreement with no discussion just does NOT jive with the character you've described. At the very least,he would have quizzed her as to her sincerity,whether she'd try to fuck on the sly,why he just wasn't good enough for her,etc. Why the fuck would he trust Sally's involvement in this,along with the Swinger she brought along to notarize the signature?! Instead of blood,did did they notarize/ swear in cum?! ~ Nope! Too easy an ending!

"I've put you, the kids and the home ahead of everything” – And he hasn’t?

SO ANONYMOUS HATER HAS GONE FROM TRASHING PARTICULAR KINDS OF STORIES TO TRASHING AUTHORS, NO MATTER HOW GOOD THEIR BODY OF WORK?

SEEMS LIT NEEDS TO HAVE COMMENTERS PASS AN IQ TEST BEFORE THEY'RE ALLOWED TO COMMENT!!!

a year and a half later he comes home early to find her fucking a man in their bed. They get divorced. The problem with this kind of woman Amanda is the is selfish and egotistical. She thinks she's a hot piece of ass when in reality all she is an ass.

Ok first love the story good one but I have one thing that bothers me the letter she sign it stats that if she try to get him I enjoy her then is out but it didn't say she had to be strat with him she can still fuck around and not tell him it should say if she fool around she out