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GrandPaMGrandPaMover 7 years ago
the story repeated itself entirely from page 3

I presume that was a copy/paste error.

Pity - I could have graded it higher with an actual ending. 3*

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07over 7 years agoAuthor
Repeated

Not sure what happened here. Have re-submitted the story, and checked it has been uploaded just the once. It will be available in a couple of days.

DestinyReaderDestinyReaderover 7 years ago
good read

Really want to read what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great story until the ending

5 stars to a 1 star. there is ZERO romance here, not a love story. he plans to use and abuse her...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Need more sex

Nice story. Unlike other morons out here. I saw more potential for future chapters. I liked the subtle take over. Well played.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
It's all just............

............ possible to believe! Oh how I wish something like that had happened to me when I was 18. Good read. Really enjoyed it.

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When you send an email enter an email address for a reply. I will often write a story by request. You will find more of my stories on Smashwords, by Gary Bingham Thank you to all on Literotica for the opportunity to publish stories and for readers comments as that has improv...