All Comments on 'Amber Ch. 05'

but not there yet. What part of her is best? It has to be her whole person... the girl who he is in love with...

and clearly she has feelings for him.

So when do they reach the culmination of their physical attraction to each other? And then how do they build to a permanent relationship afterwards?

I anxiously await you next installments.

Because your story is short, here is a short comment.

A mild but pleasant story. dan.

I dont' quite like the idea of spanking in this romantic sensual story. It's still good but I hope it stays sweet and sensual.