All Comments on 'Amber Decides Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Yes it develops character and sets the plot.

But it is to slow. And, it is way to short! Please pick up the pace and move it along better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I agree...

the story is moving too slowly esp. when one has read amber before. please update soon, with longer chapters. and make her graduate and enter college soon! of course you can prolong the summer months, but that would be dragging it. i wonder if their love will survive college?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
More sex for Amber

I hope when Amber goes to college she has a lot of sex with a lot of different guys! I hope she was just using her "mature" lover to learn about sex since she will be getting pounded on a daily basis by all the frat guys!

RealDocRealDocabout 16 years ago
i hate stories about dom / submission

you caught me off guard. This story should not be where it is. I hate domin sub stories. It is degrading to both parties.

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