by WFEATHER
But it is to slow. And, it is way to short! Please pick up the pace and move it along better.
the story is moving too slowly esp. when one has read amber before. please update soon, with longer chapters. and make her graduate and enter college soon! of course you can prolong the summer months, but that would be dragging it. i wonder if their love will survive college?
I hope when Amber goes to college she has a lot of sex with a lot of different guys! I hope she was just using her "mature" lover to learn about sex since she will be getting pounded on a daily basis by all the frat guys!
you caught me off guard. This story should not be where it is. I hate domin sub stories. It is degrading to both parties.