All Comments on 'Amber Plays Pool'

This story was well developed, and for anyone who has ever dreamed of doing it on a pool table this takes the fantasy and super sizes it!

This is a very good story. I have been jerking off about this for over a week. I wish she would write more details through.

That was sooo well written I love a piece of hot erotica.

That was great :D I loved how you built up the tension there, this is one of my favourite stories

now thats a fun game of pool I need to meet some girls like her although she teased them longer than I thought she would lol. Thanks was fun

you are awesome xxx

This was Sooo hot. Great lead up. You make your characters believable and fun. Keep it up ;)

Stories involving pool always turn me on, but as a keen pool player I was a bit alarmed about the use of the thin end of the cue in Amber's pussy. That can't be good for the cue, but I'll let it pass this time for the sake of the story. Putting the thick end in her pussy is perfectly acceptable though.

A fun read about friends enjoying some gambling.

I am ABSOLUTELY loving your stories so far!!!!!!!

Meh!

Ordinary, but still fun.

Bill S.

That was very hot, but hard to follow. I've been playing pool every day for decades but now see I've really missed out on something. As a writer I've also noticed that about everyone who writes for Literotica just can't understand the difference between the transitive verb "to lay" and the intransitive verb "to lie".But you are the first I've read to say "He lay himself down". Usually it's something like "he laid in bed until nine".

Hard to follow indeed, & I didn't finish the first Page due to mistakes.