All Comments on 'Amber's Enslavement Ch. 04'

I have your literotica stories page bookmarked and read every new story. I can't wait for the next one.

I really like your character development and the way you describe Amber's fluctuating emotions towards her slavery.

I wonder what Amber's life was like before she was captured to make her so resistant. Will her dreams shed more light on her previous life?

An incredible chapter, the ending really caught me out. i can not wait to read the rest of this wonderful story.

i would love to think that she wouldn't go down with out a fight

This is a well thought out story and the charactors r great. I feel like I am watching everything and meeting these persons myself.

Thanks 4 making everything real, and keep up the good work.

I love your stories but in the scene where Amber treats the diseased, the disease name totally jolts me out of the story. It cracked me up. Doesn't everyone know what tempura is? Why name a disease after the delicious fried Japanese food? LOL.

Wow. Powerful writing. Rare to have a tug of the feels here.