All Comments on 'Amsterdam'

I love reading your stories. Glad to see you're back into it. Can't wait for the next part

Promising, indeed.

story got off to a great start, i'm already hooked. btw, glad to see u back--I never took you off my bookmark list.

and a happy new year, nice start to a new story, pls, pls, pls finish THE LIST as well, i've enjoyed a good read from you, didn't think u would be back. don't be a stranger :)

Very nice start. Great to see you writing again!

Yesterday was a great day: it was my birthday, I found out that my new story had been posted, and then to top it all off, these great comments! Thanks guys! Look for the next part coming soon.

thanks for this new story. I love all of your works, pls pls pls finish halloween and the list,,,please :-)

Enjoying it so far! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories!

So glad to see you here - you are one of the best on this site, and it was sad to see you go!

Well welcome back again, and happy belated birthday! :)

I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.

I have published a couple of pieces on Lit and would love to get your reaction to them: london_james2010.

More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks a lot and best of luck

James

Looking to see where I am pulled with this story.