by Intimate Confessions
Thank you, I have been disenchanted with erotic tales for a long time, came across this one by chance and totally loved it. Would enjoy more tales please...
This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read. I was hard and so close all the way through. More Please! I return to this story over and over again.
I was turned on UNTIL Susan came into the story. What a cold,calculating, controling little BITCH she was. Why deny herself and her siblings from pleasure like that? I'm not into that at all. The story did have great potential until she came into it though.
This was one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Your a total genius at writing. I was practically on the edge of my seat the whole time and had a hard on to go with it. It completely drew me in to the story. PLEASE!!! write more stories about Rick and his sisters. I wanna hear more about Rick and them. THANK YOU for your writing.
This was so fun to read. I wasn't sure how it would end or where it was going but I enjoyed it.
susan ruined the story rick should have ripped her clothes off pushed her down and started fucking her while sandy sat on her face making her eat her out they are just a couple of pussy whipped whimps
just a suggestion for the sequel(I hope you write)have Susan admit to planning the whole scene while in the bathroom with her sister. ps great story
Such a nice story, I love to tease for as long as possible also before I cum.
When I do it's usually more hot sweet thick cum than normal
Please write more
That was such a hot sexy story!!!!!!! I was totally wet from the start, and had to put a towel on the seat because I was so sloppy from playing.......
Please.............more stories!!
I also liked it best before Susan came on the scene...just Rick and Sandy teasing and talking was sooooo damn hot!!
I've read almost every story on literotica since the beginning but I don't think I've ever come across anything this good. Amazing work.
My sister read yr story and asked me to read it also on her computer. After reading it i felt bold and started kissing my sister the first time and this led to fucking her for the first time. Even though we r married v wl do it whenever we get privacy.
What a hypocritical little bitch that Susan is! She should be the first one to actually get fucked in a sequel, while Sandy watches, and maybe gets licked by Rick. Question: Why did Rick call Susan, Sandy when she came? Does he secretly like her more?
why is it called "AMY'S ARDENT BOYFRIEND" if it's not about amy??? WRONG TITLE DELETE AND REDO AND USE YOUR HEAD THIS TIME.
OMG i was only half way through ur story when i had the most amazing orgasm of my life.. It usually takes me two stories to cum.. Ur did it in half.. Well done
Great story, I really liked how you led us into it, and then dropped the orgasm on us. I like sibling sex more than child/parent
GTFO you A-hole. Who died and made you the F...ing category police?
I can't help but notice that most of the anonymous comments seem to come from female readers. To cut through all the BS, I think it's a hot story and I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next. I'm not going to say what I think should happen. I'm just interested in what the author throws out there. Done fine by my thinking so far.
Not only kept me hard, but in suspense. Where you going to masturbate, blowjob, eat her pussy, fuck or what.
Hope this is not the only story or time.
Elegant words fueling ardent actions (and vice-versa).
Brother and little sister should have stripped big sister, pinned her down on the bed and little sister should have gotten off grinding her hot pussy into her sisters mouth while brother fucked the hell out of his uppity controlling sister ;). She would have put up the required token resistance, ten seconds or so, before starting to cum like a freight train! ...sounds like brother needs to invest a good portion of his income on condoms to keep two sisters happy and sleepy!
squirting has been studied. conclusion by testing is, it's urine PERIOD
I've read this story 3 time today and it makes me so hot, I love it. Wish there was more
I have to admit I have read this 6 times and I still get turned on and very wet
Great story can't wait for more
Quit reading the middle of page 2. Suzy, the dominating bitch. What sex? There was none. One of the worst stories on Lit.
Love this. The quick journey of discovery that we all want in the real world but very few get. Love it
Dude, the ebb and flow you created between Rick and Sandy easily got me off before Susan came into the room. Susan's dominance control was a surprise. It would have been cool for either girl to restrain Rick's hands, while teasing his nipples to drive him even closer to the edge of orgasm. A more detailed description of clit quadrants controlled stimulation could have been quite interesting, sexy and hot to read about. Overall, you wrote a very hot incestuous story. Good Job!
I wish I could rate this story a 15!! One of, if not the best I have ever read on Literotica! I would love to read another story with these three, the buildup was perfect! I'm going to check out more of your writings now! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!