All Comments on 'An Absolutely Perfect Jerk'

It was an excellent story until it turned into a ghost story.

What happened to the money he left? Didn't Karen think it was strange to come home and find money lying around like that? Right after an appointment she wanted to cancel but was unable to cancel?

Read some of the other comments. "Great until ghost story", "what about the money", blah,blah,blah. Oh come on people, remember these are sexual scenarios sure, but still stories. I thought the sex was great and the twist at the end an interesting idea. Even the title was clever. Screw the naysayers!

I never vote for my own stuff, I should since everybody else votes for their own....

To "too bad"...since you asked. The money was still there, Karen didn't notice, so he spent it on his NEXT massage...LOL..either that or the ghost took it to spend on more twinkies....

Hey relax, it's just for fun and titillation....MGM

I loved it! Different...didn't seem like too much of a ghost story to me. Could have been the horny old next door neighbor who keeps tabs on Karen.

Wow, this certainly reminds me of an experience of my own! (I was the fat ol' lady, and I wasn't a ghost!) But it was pretty close!

The people who have quibbles with the story are jerks.I found it entertaing,erotic and the twist at the end made it an excellent tale,leaving it to the readers imagination.

Loved the story, especially the twist at the end! I hope there is another chapter to expand on the ghost story line and to develop their own feelings!

Very well done. The pace of the story was just right that I never saw it coming.

That was fun and not quite where I expected it to go again -

Thanks -

IT MAKES YOU WONDER, LOL!

Holy HELLO....never saw that coming...GREAT STORY....thanks

As I was reading the story, I was wondering where you were going with it. But it had one hell of an ending. Thanks for a good, fun story. The twist real got me...never saw it coming.

Surprise! But a good one I guess.

*****Thanks for sharing.