All Comments on 'An Affair'

Is David married too? If it was mentioned, I missed it somehow. Either way, excellent story!! Perfect amount of buildup, hesitation, nerves, and guilt. Would’ve liked more details about their ages & appearances....but still an enjoyable story. Definitely needs another chapter.

Two people fuck. I know no more about them now than before the story started. But now I don't even care about them or what happens next. Not really anything that could be called a story.

David needs to breed her

Very well written, slow, credible buildup, very good tension between feeling of guilt and lust. Good balance too, each of them takes an active part in the seduction dance. I hope that their affair develops.

Wonderful,just the kind of date I'd want my wife to have.

A well written vignette of an adulterous tryst. BUT, for me the plot would have been better with more ‘back story’ on how the lovers got there and the relationships that they are cheating on. However, if you want to read a sensual account of a bonking session, then this is the story for you. 4 stars.