All Comments on 'An Afternoon in the Pool'

Nice slow build up, didn't think that it would end as it did but very very sexy tale, hope you write more afterall there are 3 days on them on their own

Awesome development of the characters and plot.

If it's autobiographical it's interesting, erotic and well written.

If it's fiction it's interesting, erotic and well written.

Five stars either way!!

Loved the story. Please continue it.

An very intersting, powerful story. A full and detailed description of a very fun time for all four. WOW! More please

I loved this story. Great build up, detail and a good length. I would love to hear more stories from the following two years. You have made me so horny, my cock is leaking as I write this.

Great story and it was so nice to read and not see bad spelling. I hope to see more about Amee

Erotic is in the detail in my mind, and you have done that wonderfully. Well written.

Terrific story, but you've raised the bar pretty darned high for your future contributions. Like others here, I'd love to hear more of Amee & Bobbie's adventures.

I too would love to read more. A delight.

more more more please!!!

I only hope your readers get as good a go as Amee. You told it so well and she was lucky to get it as well as that. My deepest heartfelt congratulatons.

Damn.....good one

A great story, I wondered were either of the boys were virgins as it sounded as if John could have been.

I was also surprised when you said you were a small 16-17 year old virgin girl, and that your only vaginal experience was only one of Bobbies slim fingers, then one only of John's slightly bigger fingers (a maximum of 3/4 of an inch in diameter through about a 1/2 inch diameter hymen orifice, which is reasonable to happen without damage or pain) inside your cunt, that when John's 6" long cock (from your description of it lying on your forearm ) which would be at least 2 inches diameter especially across the head and also the base) that your hymen could have been stretched from about 1/2 an inch in diameter to 2" diameter without any pain, or without it rupturing &/or bleeding. You must have been well aroused & lubricated. Well done, and I just loved the great description of your willing seduction with Bobbie, and then with John. ]

Also you were filled with John's ejaculate twice, as you climaxed each time yourself. Did you get pregnant, or were you within 5 days of your next due period when all this happened?? Great effort, hoping for some more

wow fantastic story, made me jizz twice reading it!!

Excellent job!! I would like to read the same story but from Brett and Bobbie's point of view.

Enjoyed reading it.

Thanks

This is a near duplicate it looks like to the story by AMEE085 are you the same person?

http://www.literotica.com/s/fun-in-the-pool-2

Great setup. Definitely had me on the edge wondering how far they would go in this story. Hoping that they would go all the way.

Thanks