by dnick47
If the title of this story is "An Afternoon With Dad", why is the first chapter part of the "Group Sex" category and this chapter is in "Incent and Taboo"?
Especially if both chapters of the story were come out on the same day? (Today)
Other than that, it was a ok story.
Good story, but you need a spelling and grammer checker. The errors take away from the story