All Comments on 'An Afternoon with Dad Pt. 02'

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Anonymous3000Anonymous3000about 2 years ago

If the title of this story is "An Afternoon With Dad", why is the first chapter part of the "Group Sex" category and this chapter is in "Incent and Taboo"?

Especially if both chapters of the story were come out on the same day? (Today)

Other than that, it was a ok story.

tallman441tallman441about 1 year ago

Good story, but you need a spelling and grammer checker. The errors take away from the story

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I write stories for entertainment. I do my best to dot my 'i's and cross my 't's, but I gave my grammar guide before I retired, so cut me some slack. At 74 there isn't a lot that I use to cherish doing that I am now capable of doing owing to a bad back. So to all of you fru...

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