by nnjnyclookingforfun
The word 'sight' refers to something you see with your eyes, whereas 'site' is typically used in reference to a construction location. You also have several redundancies, making it confusing and distracting for your reader. Please, please make sure to edit before you publish; it will make all the difference in the world! Had it been edited, it would have been a good story.
Thank you hon for writing a story about a *true* threesome. I just adore men who likes sucking cock just as much as they like eating pussy. I loved it. It wouldn't hurt to have an editor proof it, but it was very enjoyable. Keep it up!
Very hot story! I agree that it was great to see the two men enjoy each other as well as the woman. Thanks for writing!
You hit the nail on the head - Literotica needs a section specific to bisexual stories - and this one is a winner! As a married man who loves a big cock in my mouth just as much as my wife loves watching it, I am pleased to see an author who shares a desire to write in this genre - very pleasent read!
As I am reading this I have my cock in a soft rubber tube encased with a nylon stocking, slowly jacking it while I read, its all wet now. I sure would love to have this come true for me. I love to suck cock, and be fucked in the ass, I also love to suck on a pussy thats just been fucked.
neither ahead nor behind, neither above nor below, coupling and joining in blissful union, what could be better? True bisexuality captured in a well written story that leaves me hard and wanting more! Thanks for sharing!
Love all of that but would like him to fuck my ass too, plenty of lubrication then a long slow fucking with the wife stroking our cocks. ahh!
Awesome story. I would love for an experience like that with another couple, they wouldn't have to be interracial but that would be fine with me.