by fairlady64
This is the way that erotica should be written with character development and a lack of sleeze leading to a subtle climax, and a hope/expectation for more. Not weighing the story down with needless detail, but instead just providing enough detail to let your imagination fill in the blank spots. This girl, of less than 22 years old writes with the skill of a pro. Read this and learn how to write erotica.
I am a huge Audrey Hepburn fan, but I would have enjoyed it more if this wasnt about her and another woman. Sorry. I dont have anything against lesbianism... but I just cant immagine Audrey having sex with another woman. Cant you do a story with her and a man? Otherwise the story was great. Almost bought me to orgasm! Lol.
I think it was very sexy without being exploitative or disrespectful, and I'd love to see a sequel.
Absolutely phenomenal. It's a damn shame how few and far between stories like these are. Would absolutely love to see a sequel.