by Ashson
That was weird. No really. Don't know whether it was what you had intended, but the male character seemed rather detached. There was no discernable emotion present during the plying of the sexual act that would differentiate it from him making breakfast porridge. And the description made me incredibly horny. I'm slightly rattled. Sure, the smugness of the arrogant bastard-type doesn't do it for me, but hell, the drive-through attendant? Anyway, shot for story. Very interesting. I'm hungry...
Read it again to make sure. Still liked it. Wait, wait...yep, still liked it. And still freaked out. Have to say, reading it the first time round, it immediately struck that something was different from your other works already in the first part of the story.
Hungry...
As always an interesting story. I am never sure where you are going, but the trip is always worth taking. Good, bad or indifferent your stories are always enjoyable.
And what the definition of consensual is... And the female being shocked but never doing anything... Over and over again... You find interesting scenarios (some of the time) but the structure of your stories is so damn formulaic.
Wish he ended it by saying "By the way I'll rape you a few more times before you marry so that you are better prepared and won't feel guilty" lol
think that conscious and conscience are the same word...yikes!