All Comments on 'An Erotic Christmas Carol'

This is a revision of an earlier work, isn't it? I recall reading it with a "Copyright 1995" just below the title on another site. It's very odd--the revisions seem to both help and hurt the story at the same time. Still, a very solid piece of work overall.

pl write a sequel to what next

In the beginning, I was thinking it was going to be cut and dry. But as the "christmas carol" part of the story concluded and the rest of your story began, was a nice little twist id have to say. Well done.

and everybody's happy?

I don't think so. One star.

A nice erotic twist on an old Christmas classic. Well done.

Excellent balance: strong character development, many extremely touching moments, and hot sex that fit well into the storyline. It was also fun to anticipate how the classic tale would play out in this setting. Thoroughly enjoyed this one. My only (minor) complaint is that I don't remember Eben doing anything about the orderly who raped Tiffany in the Christmas future. I decided to assume he was taken care of by Eben....