All Comments on 'An Evening by the River'

find a love like that would be perfection...

The story line was very good, but because of the bad grammar and so many wrong words placed incorrectly it was very hard to follow. I gave it 3 stars but if the story had been proofread and corrected I would likely have given 5. I'm sure that English and grammar weren't your best subjects so please have someone look over your work before you post any more, for your sake as well as the sake of the readers here,