An Evening by the River

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Just at that moment a jogger came by, just to see two people holding each other side by side, one the rock wall next to the river, watching the sunrise. It seemed we had the world to ourselves that night, and the sun broke through the invisible barrier that kept us secret. We walked away from the spot together, holding hands, as if we had been together for years. And for years to come we came back to that spot at night, always seemed to find a shelter, where we could love each other, in a world of our own.

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JaxxonZJaxxonZalmost 3 years ago

The story line was very good, but because of the bad grammar and so many wrong words placed incorrectly it was very hard to follow. I gave it 3 stars but if the story had been proofread and corrected I would likely have given 5. I'm sure that English and grammar weren't your best subjects so please have someone look over your work before you post any more, for your sake as well as the sake of the readers here,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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find a love like that would be perfection...

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