All Comments on 'An Indecent New Years Proposition'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Voyeur

Beautifully written, sensitive, tense, arousing, nicely experimental, continous tensión, good language, Congrats. I'd loved to see it! Perhaps missng light SM.

ladyarossladyarossabout 10 years ago
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Was mildly disappointed in the ending. It showed a definite gender type mentality. The before content though was vey well written.

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