All Comments on 'An Itch Needing Scratching'

I'm a straight male. I would love to be in that room with that bevvy of beauties

Very well written just a tad too much fashion talk though

I am also a straight mail, who loves pussy eating but have never had one squirt in my mouth and woulf love it. That story turned me on something rotten.

It was a well written story. I would expect no less than that with someone who has a background in English. However, a little editing would have corrected the typos. Style and content were good and it kept me wanting read more. One suggestion for you, pick a style of speech. It seemed to me that you were searching for metaphors to put in place of slang words in the beginning. If you want to say pussy, cock, or fuck then just say it. Jumping back and forth can be somewhat straining. Can't wait to read more works by you.

The 100 rating I gave was for the story. You have an erotic way with words. Your story is hot and sensual, a real turn on... However, you also have a very non-erotic way with words. In this area, I give you 60 or less. I was surprised after reading your biography at the many spelling and grammar errors for someone as educated as you indicate. I agree with Gossamer71: use spellcheck or get a better editor. And have confidence - you are an excellent writer. And catching these errors will move you to the next level

Hope hubby is REAL understanding. Sounds like he will be the odd man out from now on. Ah marital bliss.

Wonderful story. You have a great gift for story telling and bringing a scene to life. Thank you for the great read. Now how do I get invited to a similar lingerie party?

Utterly awe inspiring - juicy, well written, a sensory explosion and lots of resonances to deeper themes. I was particularly moved by the opening masturbation scene - I can so relate to that feeling of being so horny I can't do anything else but get myself off. And it has taken me decades to do it with the ease, self love and lack of guilt that she manifests. This is a big gift!