All Comments on 'An Obstinate Mother'

is this a repost, or what? i just read this not long ago , if i recall correctly

You slip from first party to third party narrative in a most confusing manner, detracting from an otherwise passable story. Your spelling and grammar needs much work too. If you're going to post again, please have your story checked and proof-read before publication.

crap

Did you proofread this?

Did you share it with an editor?

Definitely worthy of the dreaded Minus Two.

Yes, it's the dreaded triple D

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Big fan of momstheboss, but this will appeal mostly and moistly to those who missed stories the first time around. No vote for this incarnation, but first time around I voted 5 stars. Not mad about the rehash, as in my opinion they didn't get attention and number of comments they deserved.

She who? Could not keep track of whether "she" was the mom or "she" was the wife. Appeared to be one and then switched to the other. Stopped reading a third of the way on the first page.

abuse of spelling and grammar I've seen here. It's like the writing of a 7th grade dropout. Couldn't finish the first page. What a waste of time trying.

I wish that there was a 0 stars available but even that would be generous. Grammar, syntax, misuse of adjectives, Confusing rambling sentences, etc. Is English your second or third language? Pure CRAPOLA!!!!

I have no idea what is going on.

Perhaps read it aloud before submitting, theme is sound but i need a roadmap of characters in and out, this draws one away from the goings on

There may have been some confusions such as the son calling his mother Bev etc.

The concept of almost making her beg for his cock is good.

I do hope that you could write another longer story with an initially reluctant mother made to badly want the son's cock (and sperm) deep in to her pussy.

this story is still very good. On occasion it's (unintentionally?) funny, as when Beverly asks her son George, "Why do you always have to go straight for my pussy?" Momma, what do you expect from a big strong lusty boy? For him, that hairy hole between your thighs, the same hole he came out of, is the brass ring, top of the heap, what so many boys can only jerk off dreaming about--his own mother's cunt. I love it when her kid is up inside her up to his balls and mom thinks it's been too long since "she had had a warm cock inside her attached to a warm and breathing man she loved and trusted." See, that's the thing. So many, many mothers could learn from Beverly's experience. They feel unfulfilled, sexually at sea, when the solution to all their problems is right there. It's jumping around in their own boy's pants. Their son's got the fat sturdy cock that can give them the power fucks they need and crave. Plus, he's got a pair of hot young balls that never quit--they keep on producing the loads and loads of creamy semen that moms love to see in their virile manly boys. As the wise old saying goes, "a boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other!"

Loved it very arousing

Many moms think no woman is good enough for her son. Competition with wife occurs and can result in mom helping sexually frustrated son.

I like some of your stories, but were you drunk when you wrote this one?

Please go dry out before posting anything new!