All Comments on 'An Officer and An Italian Ch. 01'

I was so happy when I scrolled down the NEW stories and saw your name. I can't wait for the next installment.

I can't wait to read the next chapters!

Picked her up in the police station, he would have been arrested for attacking an officer. No one would have let him take a female officer out of there against her will. It was juat a bit much.

Fantastic storybook romance drawn on a big tapestry, with enough eroticism to turn any man or woman on for days--and nights--to cum.

So happy to see a new story from you. I love your writing and can't wait to read more.

The title sets the scene and Sergio is a HOT Italian that makes a lady's pulse race faster! Rachel has kissed him and is oh-so-aware of his potential. Her Captain & god-father

may see what one reader "doesn't"--she is not unwilling and

Sergio wants the best for her--HIM! Chapter Two is going to

be VERY interesting!! I am betting on Rambo getting wet and

enjoying himself too!!

i love this one and will be waiting for the next chapter i also want to hear about Nicky

Although I agree with the person who said that Sergio's invasion of personal space and kidnapping of Rachel at the police station was very unrealistic (and to be honest a very disrespectful thing for him to do), I love all your stories! You should totally think about writing professionally if you don't already do so!

I hope that he learns to be a bit more respectful of her and her capabilities as a police woman, and that she softens a bit to him! Can't wait for more!

ps. speaking of secondary characters in stories, are you going to write the story of Dominic from Isabelle's story? It would be great if you did eventually write about that!!

I have to agree with the other comments. This is an excellent story, I hope to see some more chapters soon. I only have one request, for those of us who don't speak or know Italian, could you maybe put at the end of a chapter a translation of some of terms you use. It took me some time to find out what "Brutta birbona" meant.

That's a great way to end a chapter. Please, don't keep us in suspense.

I loved this chapter and am waiting for the next chapter. I'm tired of waiting. WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER!! To leave us waiting for so long could be considered curel and unusal punnishment.

This was good ...

Very good. Sergios kinda stalkerish, but I love it. This story is also really funny; I've been laughing almost the whole time. Great work; I really enjoyed it. Now I'm on to chapter two!

Hahahaha this story is amazing! So funny!

Very funny.

What Latinos are about love!

Never underestimate an european latin, whether Italian, French or Spanish, if they find their soul mate, they will fight for it until the end of their days.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.