All Comments on 'An Old Man's Christmas Wish'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WOW!

Wonderful story that sets preconceived notions of "old age" aside. Developed a tale that this experienced man could make love in a extremely sexual manner.

KEEP IT UP!

josephstevensjosephstevensover 10 years ago
wonderful!

you never fail to deliver....and yes, i dont mind admitting it, i am typing this with one hand whilst my other hand is doing amazing things to my cock...lovely!

Reiner43Reiner43over 10 years ago
Great stuff!

I enjoyed the intentional sexuality of the characters. The little section where the older man told you to open your pussy wide for him to look at, and you instantly complied, was a masterpiece and it set the erotic tone for the rest of the tale.

Keep up the nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OMG!

Oh my dear!! This story got my pussy dripping wet with just the first few paragraphs! Can't wait for more; you are amazing!

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
sensuious, arousing

Forgive my spelling hard to spell right when so turned on. I get wetter and wetter with each story. Your a wonderful writer and I feel like I am in the room, that is the way the story should be told like you have replaced a character and are enjoying the same things. The licking and sucking, the deep penetration. Wow thanks again

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