by wordsinthedust
I am glad that you decided to continue writing this story. It is a great story. I enjoyed reading it & I hope you will not keep us waiting as long for the remaining parts of it.
I SO wish I had a twin sister. I absolutely LOVE this series. Thank you author.
I hope that they soon realize that they were meant to be lovers and live as husband and wife. They have been in love with each other all of their lives, and now it's the time that they share their bodies with each other. No more questions about if they want each other now that they know what each other feel in their heart.Thanks for this sweet loving story, and hope to read the rest of the story soon.........Rich
Sexy, tender and sweet...Oh And HAWT! Well worth the wait. please continue the series. Job well done! Thanks!
Keep it the same as it is just grow it far into the future, have them deal with this issue with their kids someday:-) Very loving, tender, satisfying love story, must have a happy ending! There are more than enough stories with degradation, pain, humiliation and unhappy endings, keep this one the way it has started out.
Excellent story, I really love it.
I do have a gripe though. There are far too many uses of "She/He/I said" after dialogue. I makes their conversations seem quite dreary and lacking emotion.
That isn't a flame, It's some con-crit as I do enjoy this story!
I really like your description of the twins relationship. Bordering on innocence, but at the same time very erotic. I've enjoyed the first two chapters.
Superb incest story telling. Likeable, believable characters. Most of all, a believable story. Enjoying the reading and, of course, enjoying a steady erection the whole time. Julius
How long until she gets pregnant? They have not used any protection and you have not said she is on the pill.
I post as Anonymous to protect the innocent.
Nicely done, I love the scenes where the siblings are so close emotionally, allowing their love to cross so many boundaries.
IMHO: Any incest story should address how the 'taboo' is surmounted. You present both a believable situation and a (hot) follow-up. Very well done.
I love the pacing, the dialogue, and the long tease.
And thank you for not giving the exact specs on his cock or the sister's cup size. This story is what erotica should be.