All Comments on 'An Unexpected Invitation'

hope you do another with this and how the sister got pregnant?

Excuse my crazy question but... how is "Sally" a derivative of "Sarah"? It isn't shortened or a nic-name. Anyway, interesting situation. Mike was a busy lad for a few years with both Jackie and Cassie! Plus, the hint about the baby-bump with Sally leads to all sorts of situations. Cheers..

OK premise.

But all sex is too automatic. Too mechanical.

Needed much more in the way of foreplay/preliminaties/exploration.

Three stars.

Thanks for not going anal. Good fun reading. Lot of action.