All Comments on 'An Unforgettable Melody Ch. 06'

have been well thought out, written, and presented. Keep going.

You obviously know the musician part, it seems real to me, even if I have no idea what a professional orchestra musician is like. As for the later part, good that Darcy has now seen what a loser her bf is and can move on. A lot of other authors would probbably be setting things up for a threesome, however I don't think that fits the characters. But they're YOUR characters. Anyway, I'll read the whole series.

This story is very nicely written. I like the small touches that give the characters more personality -- things like their musical interests, background, what video games they play... All builds a very compelling and believable story. It's very easy to suspend disbelief about a sex genie when you've got such a richly designed sandbox.

Keep up the good work!

Umm, Where is this? If I swing at someone it is assault, if I touch it is battery. Most jurisdictions that I know would lock his ass up. He may not get charged -the DA decides , But public intoxication, assault, drunk and disorderly All those or their equivalent are arrestable offenses.

Other than that, Good story so far :)

steve