All Comments on 'An Unlikely Encounter'

I cant believe im the 1st to comment! Amazing! Keep writing!

That was hot! The best I've read in ages. Wow!

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Another amazing story, thank you!! I especially loved the scene in the restaurant...it was so steamy, I can't help but wonder if you had some inspiration?

Superb story. One of the best I've ever seen. Thanks for sharing!

Awesome work! So hot - I was totally there - characterisation was great and the sexual tension - OMG! Please tell me there will be more?

why this did not earn an "E". How could it get any better? Probably the best example of the teacher-student genre in YEARS! Bravo!

that was THE BEST story i have ever read on here EVER.

the length drew it out so well but u kept me hard as a rock to the end! Thers a girl in my year at school just like her.....

Such a great story, thank you.............. so hot

What a quality text. Every author here should be required to read this story before they submit. They could learn so much from your,style, characterization, setting, pace, dialog and build-up to the big finish. I could go on and on, but I just got off work from a 14 hour overnight shift and I wanted to read just one story on Literotica before I crashed. I "had" to pick yours and I could not stop reading until the end. I guess I'll be tired tonight when I go to work? BOY, will it have been worth it!

I had a college professor I was completely in lust with, and I wish I had been as brazen and brave as Autumn!

I enjoyed it, really! But, I was going nuts waiting for the action to begin, and felt let down by the sudden ending.

ok this wa s a really great story but one question (and then ....what?)where's the rest of it you should definitelt write more of this the endding was disappointing

Loved the anticipation in the story. It drove me crazy waiting for the 2 to get together. However, the climax was a little bit of a let down. I expected fireworks and got a few bangs. Would love to read more though.

This is why I'll never be a teacher! Great storytelling, please keep this one going.

Dude this is an awesome ass story,Please tell us there are another 9 chapters coming up? Damn keep it up this one is the best!

You keep on writing about the same concept of the tempted male in different situations. I think it would be great if you could try newer subject matter. Unless of course, this is the only fantasy that gets you off.

Is the man in ecstasy or delirium?? I think the biggest part of this story is yet to be told.. Will it be?? The ending was pretty hot.. Chapter 8 has a good bit of chapter 7 in it, though.. But still very good.. I would have liked to have known just how much Autumn did know about sex.. She got it all out of a book?? I do think a few more chapters would go well!!

That was by far the best story I have read. Ever. I as well wish there were about 10 more chapters.

This was absolutely marvelous! I loved the teasing, how unbelievably drawn out it was. On the other hand, your narrator was so real, I could FEEL his struggle. Whether there's more, or this is just a one-shot, I think this story hits all the right spots!

Wow! amazing writing ... like a really great meal, it takes time to cook, the waiting was worth it. The style is excellent, the flow perfection.

I disagree with some previous posters here in that I think you chose the perfect point at which to end.

You always do.

I thought Autumn's showing up at her teacher's girlfriend's house in the end was a little forced, but I guess it fits the "unlikely encounter" theme.

I'd have liked to have seen a romantic rival of some kind introduced after a few encounters...maybe an obnoxious jock class-clown type that Autumn would flirt with to get under her teacher's skin, someone who could introduce a sort of denial / reluctant competition for her attention. The climax of the story could have been Autumn's teacher chaperoning prom night where she and jock-boy go as dates. I think it'd be pretty hot for him to lust for her, but be unable to outright compete for her, all the while wondering whether she's just teasing him or if he's actually losing her to someone her own age.

Thanks for permanently burning another girl's name into my head. First Kaylee, now Autumn...where do you find these girls?? ;)

amazing. please do a sis in law story. (wife younger sis). Please!

Absolutely, totally amazing, an incredible piece of fiction. I don't think I've ever read any better piece of erotica. The tension, the characters' feelings come across as totally realistic and believable.

Very erotic...Phew!!

This is the quality of story that I have long been searching for. Your characters are incredibly real...everything from the internal dialog and emotional struggles of the main character to the duality of nervousness and excitement of the teenage Autumn. So many "erotic" stories are nothing more than porn with words, but you have mastered the art of exquisite temptation and desire. Your story comes across as a symphony compared to the typical cacophony. Rather than just throw people into sexual situations where the characters engage in sexual positions over and over (usually to the point far beyond human capability), you've opted for a much more subtle approach. The actual sex itself (only two true acts and both fairly short in description compared to the length of the story) is FAR hotter than most due to the intense buildup. In so many instances, I wondered what was going to happen next and, like the main character, I couldn't wait to see what she wrote in her short story so we could see it from her perspective.

And, on a technical level, writing in the first person format is always a far better choice for erotica since it psychologically requires the reader to put themselves in the character's place and therefore experience the story on a deeper level.

Thank you for your quality efforts. I will definitely be reading more of your work.

You are the best......... man......... just the perfect story.............. Something I was long looking for......

Really great story. Nice build up, excelent plot.

The question left unanswered for me is: was she on the pill?

Poor teacher could be really pissed up ...

Wow, simply amazing! Often I get bored with longer stories after a page or two, but you had me until the very end...well done! I try to develop characters and establish a slow burn in my own stories, but you take things to an entirely different level! I am officially humbled.

I was delighted to see you had a new story, and I was not dissappointed. (Please tell us more about yourself in the author bio section. I'm curious.)

First, En_Extase is one of the best writers on the site. His style of writing is novel-quality, and consistently builds drama and tension without being too sublime.

That said, this is essentially the same as every other story En_Extase has ever written--weak masculine protagonist, over-zealous and manipulative woman. Too many of these scenes rely on a now-cliche` powerless-to-resist mechanism.

En_Extase is a fantastic writer, adept at creating lush settings in few words and summoning palpable tension at will, but compared to his prior work, this lacks originality and...spark. The protagonist's powerlessness is too overdone, and the vixen's manipulations are too exact. The contrast makes the story progress in sharp jerks instead of smoothly climaxing, as there's never any doubt how either character will act in a situation--just take the worst-case scenario.

En_Extase needs to branch out by giving greater character depth and less black-or-white roles. This will naturally cause plots to smooth out, while bringing more intrigue into the stories.

.... you are an amazing writer. The style and attention to detail is second to none.... please, please, please continue to keep it up ... ( so to speak ! )

Thank you

I love everything.... the slow build-up, the characters, even the title fits perfect.

I usually can't finish a long story, but this one didn't seem long. I actually think the action at the end could have been longer and more descriptive.

Still a flawless story. write more of these please!!

Nice work...

All I could muster at the end was... Wow

purely amazing

The anticipation buildup between the teacher and student was about as intense and hot as one could get. The finish was absolutely perfect as there's no doubt what he does in following her to his girlfriend's bedroom. Wow - one hot teen tamale!! Great piece -- of writing!

I need To Know What Happens Next!!

Immense Story.

x

Wow, that was awesome. The suspense was gripping, and my stomach was in knots with anticipation and excitement. Very well told.

even though you could guess what will happen it the end, the buildup was just amazing. It gradually ramped up without becoming cliched or overstretched. kudos

One of the hottest stories I've read.

Even if it was a little to 'drawn out'.

Cheers

Yoron.

I am a teacher and have had almost a complete reflection of this happen to me as well.

As ashamed of it as I am, it still was the most volcanic sex ive ever had in my entire life.

When you wrote how "on fire" he was...oh how I remembered.

Sometimes...urges win over rationality.

and when they win...wow.

One of the best. The climax was beautifully done, as was the build up. These are the gems on this site. Thank you!

Best story on Literotica I think:D

keep up the good work!

one of my new fav's....keep it up

Loved it, and I'm not usually a fan of dirty old guy type fantasies ;op

The only negative thing I could say, speaking as someone with an appalling tendancy to throw a 'like' or two into every sentence, is that you don't quite have the rythm right for it. I swear, I know it sounds retarded, but there's actually some rhyme and reason to where 'like' goes in your sentence!

But that really didn't detract from the story. It was just awesome.

Very good.

The only thing I have against your story is how obnoxious I know this girl would be in real life... Preppy little gym rats, dressing up for school, of all things.

But then, that's just me, hating that stereotype of girls.

Great story.

I wish I had the confidence of Autumn to go after my teacher...

Yeah, HOT SEX, when we finally get at it through all the angst. I'm titilated, but shut up, Woody Allen! It is in the end empty & pointless, immoral, ugly, and just not fun.

mouth dry.... muscles twitching.... cannot focus.... UGUGGHHHH!!! Oh...sorry, but that was great!

Great story, the sex is HOT! The buildup is awesome, even if some of the other bits story is a bit sophomoric and contrived.

Not usually into this type of story but you did a great job with it. Kept me interested through all of the chapters. Looking forward to reading part 2.

I think this is one of the best stories on the site. Thanks for putting the work in.

That was briliant, got me very excited...xx

i usually don't leave comments here, but now after reading and enjoying this story, i have to tell you: thank you :-)

it is so exciting, the build-up, and it lasts just long enough...

keep on writing :-*

wow this is so freaking hot. <3___<3 i loved the kiss scene, haha!

The best piece I've read as far as I can remember. Really liked the teachers comments about his students giving more realism to his persona

I really, really liked it. The only thing I did not like was Autumn saying like all the time. Yes, I know teenage girls do it, but not that much. And it made her sound sooo stupid.

This is one of the all time best erotic stories I've read. The internal torment he was feeling was real, and on the mark. The other "real feeling" part was Autumn. Having a daughter (with a lot of friends) about that age, I can tell you that Autumn's speaking and mannerism's were right on. I'm looking forward to reading the next two installments this afternoon. Thank you for your detailed writing, and creative story telling.

Tony_45

There were tiny flaws in the writing, but overall this is a most remarkable tale. I'm not a teacher, so have experienced neither the reality nor the fantasy portrayed, but it felt totally convincing, drew me right into his head.

Hahaha, I loved the story but i agree with the other comment about the

"like"s in the story. It made her sound ditzy

Nice...apart for the way Autumn said like again and again, it was perfect. Or maybe even that added to the charm...continue the good work

Since it's about an English teacher, you may as well know - it's EXASPERATING, not exacerbating...

Geez, as an English teacher myself, I never should have read that, but I guess these stories are just fantasies, and, of course, I would never actually do anything like that, EVER!

Really well done, my friend! Really well done!

Story was ok. And I guess somewhat similar to the other stories regarding student-teacher relationship. Awfully long and tiring to read. Easy to guess what will happen next.

Nine pages of buildup. it felt like years reading it, agonizing over the details and letting the pictures form, her smiles and glances become clear in my minds-eye. Her curves and outfits, tilt of her head as she pouts...

Damnit that was an amazing tease - one of the best characters I've read.

Where will it go?

I cannot wait to find out :)

M

WOW! I don't usually read a story that has this many pages, but you had me hooked before I got to the bottom of page 1. I may have to rethink whether I read longer stories if they are this good. This is the BEST story I have read yet! I can't wait to read the next two and anything else you've written. The build up was great and just added to the anticipation.

You drew me right in. It is so rare to find user-submitted literature that is so carefully crafted and brilliantly executed. I started here and have read several of your other submissions--your talent is obvious. Keep up the good work.

I didn’t like that one…

Err… No. Fuck. I’m a liar. And not even a good one.

I liked it. Pretty much.

It wasn’t good. It was perfect!

You write in such an enchaining way. I wasn’t able to turn away from it for a minute.

And this was only part one.

this is really good. you do some amazing writing, well done.

I've read some great stuff on this site, from Conflicted to older stuff by TryAnything to a great erotic game by Tx_Tall_Tales... This is better than all of those stories. This is fantastic. Wow.

This is a great story, one of the best I have read.

One of the five best stories I've read here. Worthy of every accolade.

This story (and this series) are probably the best I've read on this site. I hope that you keep it up! You have a real gift...

wow. The best i've ever read! Fucking incredible. Thanks for a great night in alone!

wow....that was....wow. So hot- it made me think of the teacher I had a crush on in high school. This was way better than any fantasy of him I could have dreamed up!

The best story i have read by far! It was soo well written and drawn out, capturing my interest for the entire length of the story! Thank you!

It's all been said before, but wow that was an incredible trip you wrote up. Not only was it one of the best I've read, it was fun, witty, sexy, suspenseful, and yet you could still somehow relate to the protagonist. A perfect seduction where you can pity the main character because of the near perfect entrapment and seduction. Now I'll have to read the rest of your works, if you have the time please continue showing us your gifted writing.

~Hap

Extremely well-written. A pleasure to read; keep up the great work!

Wow, you are an amazing writer...I've been 'coming' here for years and I can't remember a story with more build up and anticipation. Most stories I wouldtn't read as far into the plot, but you kept it very interesting and it was worth every minute of it! Keep writing more stories, you've got a fan here. Thanks!!

This has been the only story I felt most excited about and read all 9 pages. Over all great story line.

This is extremely well done. The plot was deliciously woven and I was totally consumed by your main characters. My only suggestion would be to have created another character for Autumn to interact with.

So, wow, that was intense. The suspense was amazing. I felt like I was being teased as well, the detail was so well done. I was so absorbed by this story I read all the pages in a row. Beautifully done. Can't wait for more. :)

Wow. That's all I can say. This was probably the most well-written, best plotted story I have ever read on this site. I had to read through the whole thing again immediately after I finished it. Keep writing, because you are amazing.

this was one of the most amazing n exciting stories i've ever read.. it went through 9 pages bt still held the reader latched onto every single word.. so much better than all the other head-on porn stuff.. great work, keep it up.. looking forward to more stuff from you..

all your male characters simply think with their dick and have absolutely no willpower.

Sensational writing. You deserve an A+ :-)

I really enjoyed the tension that you threaded through the entire story. The play of emotions really gives it an impact.Good job.

seriously dude, you're my hero. Can't wait for more of your publishings. Keep up the great work :) !

By far the best story I've read on this site. I'm a fan now!

Your little blocks of humour is perfect with the reluctance and realism. I laughed hysterically at the anal tryhard students.

Your stories are incredible. Absolutely perfect, even if they're similar.

This is just so smoking hot... Once her senior year ends there are no restrictions anymore you know :p I'm totally one of your fans xD

At 50..I feel a bit of a perve having read that...but having experienced some of those sexual desires with a 20 year old a few years back, I can relate. Your work is well written and it held my attention for the 2 hrs it took for me to read .( a few somke breaks & walking around to break the tension). Well done! We want more!

story by En_Extase that I've read, and it is REALLY hot! I agree with the commenter who said most of the stories on here are just porn with words thrown in; this one is miles above that and clearly erotic (in the best sense). Pacing, character development, care in writing; it's all here. The way she twists everything he says or doesn't say is so perfectly . . . female. She's good at what she's doing!

I'm a teacher, and know that I have to be really careful---and these days, careful not just with girl students but boys too. (It's been years since my bod would tempt anybody, but that doesn't mean rumors can't destroy your life.) All the way through the story, I had this sinking feeling in my gut that the main character was going to throw away his career, reputation, girlfriend---everything, just to get inside Autumn's shorts. These things never stay secret permantently, and this will not end well. The legal and moral dilemma is that she's his student; other than that, she's of age, neither of them is married, and they're legally free to sleep with whoever. From the sound of things, he's probably not more than 24 or 25 himself, so their being attracted is not freakish. The long and short of it is, this is the best erotica I've ever read!

This is one of the best stories iv ever read. It made me so horny while reading it at work that I had to take two separate trips to the bathroom to satisfy the ache between my legs. So thanks for the great story!!!

This made me so hot! I wish my professor would go for this...actually I wish I was as bold as Autumn. Great plot nonetheless.

One of the best stories I've ever read.

That was awesome! One of the best stories I've ever read, period. You are a master of the build up, and I hope you keep writing more!

I've personally never slept with any girlfriend's sister...but my ex's older sister offered it one day when we were alone watching football during the holidays. She followed me downstairs to get a soda and pressed her tits into me 'accidentally' trying to reach around me to get herself one too. I played dumb because I'd just met her that weekend and couldn't tell if she was serious or just testing me. I realized weeks later that she'd never mentioned anything to my gf, good or bad - so she was serious. So I blew my one chance.

But I did have some great fantasies while I fucked my ex, thinking of her older sis. ;)

Damn, my dick is so hard a cat couldn't scratch it! Please keep on writing. I'm adding you to my "Favorite Authors". MORE, MORE !

Excellent... you are one of the hottest authors on this site!