All Comments on 'An Uprooted Standard of Modesty'
by 49greg
- 7 Comments
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoa very good story but if you decide to add chapters there is so much more that can occur....janet wating to try other men and convincing her hubby to allow it. slowly turning him into a cuckold.... hope there is more to follow.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI liked the story, but there were too many errors. At one point the leading lady is referred to as Karen, Chuck is referred to as Bill at least twice, and there are other typos--extra words, etc. You either need a reliable editor or you need to proofread your own work much more carefully.
49gregalmost 8 years agoAuthorOuch. I am the author of this story and apologize for the errors. There is another character in the story named Bill, who I originally named something else before i changed it. I wanted to include the name of a character in an other story in the "Woodston Universe". I must have gotten overboard in changing names.
Karen. Geeze. Again sorry. I have no idea where that came from.
Sorry about the mistakes. That's what happens without an editor. I went over this story at least four times, including one time when I printed it out. I really thought that I had it right. I am sorry. I can only try to be more careful on future stories. Like most writers on lit I do it for a hobby, I'm not a professional. I guess that's what to expect for a free story.
Anonymousover 6 years agoCute story, good fun, I’d like to hear more adventures involving this couple.
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