All Comments on 'And So What's This?'

by Otazel

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
One star

Could not get past the first paragraphs.

wibitriwibitriover 10 years ago
4 stars!

Keep going.

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 10 years ago
To "One Star"

Your loss. The story was amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fucking awesome

This from a 72 yo hetro male in australia

Arago007Arago007over 10 years ago
Sexy as hell...

This was so HOT! I don't know WTF one star has up their ass, but this was a solid 5 stars...

Skyler35Skyler35over 10 years ago
5 Stars!!

So hoooot, well derseved 5 stars!!!

dazzleredd41dazzleredd41over 10 years ago
OMG

omg i need a cold shower my body is throbbing like crazy from reading this wow

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very Nice!

A prefect description of a first encounter. Very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WOW!!

That was hot!! I can't wait for my girlfriend to come home & use mine on her!! Gonna be a long night!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
❤️❤️

Hot made me cum

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
And the next installment is?

You've done this one very well, IMO.

Any chance of a next part please?

73

HP

starting2livestarting2liveover 10 years ago
Very well written!

Very sexy, without being "just sex". I like the narrative explaining what was going on in her mind as things progressed. That made it all a very plausible, realistic scenario. I have imagined many times how my wife's first time with another woman will go, and it's very similar to this. Maybe after she reads it we'll both have the same ideas?! Good job!

Darla7000Darla7000over 9 years ago
Wonderful !

Thank you for my pleasure, too. Those first times are just incredible and you helped me remember some of mine. They've always been so exciting !

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Wow your story made me so wet, i need someone to fuck me now

Darla7000Darla7000over 8 years ago
OMG !

Just wonderful ! So wish it could have been me !

CliterateDykeCliterateDykealmost 7 years ago

Superb story, loving, really fucking beautiful. I don't know why it bothhers me that her betraying her marriage vows wasn't a big deal though. I'm a lesbian in a relationship with my lover & I've been hit on by other women. I have been sorely tempted but my promises to her have held me to honor them. BUT it is a story & not real life,&an incredibly well told story. 5 stars, & my sincerest thanks for a delicious tale. BTW I know you're a guy, but you'd be a wonderful lesbian lover. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Damn, that was so very satisfyingly hot!! I need a cigarette.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very erotic.

Yet another great story and very well told.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hot!Hot!Hot!

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