All Comments on 'Angel Ch. 01'

Well writen, kept me interested. I loved how it flowed and didn't seem choppy or thrown together. Can't wait for the next chapter and seeing where it goes. -Charlie

Beautifully expressive story that was a wonderful read. This story should continue as I am sure there are so many wonderful places you can go with this now. Thank You!

wonderful wonderful

My Darling George

Thank you for writing such a wonderful biography of me - your friend - Angel Jones. You really have an understanding of what it is like to be a young transsexual and I value our friendship hugely. I would like all your readers to know that I am a real person - your friend - and your biggest fan. Readers can reach me at:

blondetvbabe@yahoo.com

Angel Jones

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Hi George - this is my new myspace page: - http://profile.myspace.com/angeljonests

This is a great story and I even though a T-girl as well am in love with Angel and wish I were as young as she but sa la vie.. I will for sure read all of her stories now..!!

I have always enjoyed reading and writing more than most my age. I sent you a message after only reading the first page here. But I did read the entire work to the end. Loved it too! Some of the best writing I have ever read.

Loved the description of angel's feelings while being penetrated. One question though why do authors always focus on the t-girl ejaculation and not on the clenching female type orgasm that is so much more intense? Or maybe it isn't for other "girls" and I'm just weird.

Good story and hot, I can't wait to read the next chapter(s),

Though the story is quite hot and good, I do feel it dragged on at times, both in the story part (you perhaps went too detailed on Angel's past and situation, you need to be concise and try to make the story as engaging as possible if it needs to be a bit longer) and in the sex part (a bit too much repetition, try to mix things up, both in sex acts and words used to describe them).

I found this error on the first page of your story. I love the story and have read all of the chapters some time ago. I am surprised that no one had pointed out the error.

"That doctor had suspected the reason fairly early and, after considerable research and discussion, had showed his patient case histories of female-to-male transsexuals or, as they often preferred to call themselves, T-girls."

T-girls are male to female transsexduals. You goofed.

of pseudo-christians: it's not their fault they sin, the devil (or the Angel) seduced them. mr. parker hasn't got the backbone of even a jellyfish.

What an ASSHAT! She deserves better. Good writing, can't wait to read more!