All Comments on 'Angel Ch. 05'

These stories are getting hotter and better all the time. I hope you keep it going.

My Darling George

Thank you for writing such a wonderful biography of me - your friend - Angel Jones. You really have an understanding of what it is like to be a young transsexual and I value our friendship hugely. I would like all your readers to know that I am a real person - your friend - and your biggest fan. Readers can reach me at:

blondetvbabe@yahoo.com

Angel Jones

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Hi George - this is my new myspace page: - http://profile.myspace.com/angeljonests

Hi George - this is my new myspace page: - http://profile.myspace.com/angeljonests

Fantastic,erotic,one of a kind. Could not stop reading untill the end.I wish it could keep going on and on and on

Well, the story does go on and on. That was Chapter 5 of ten, with more to come. They total over 100,000 words already, which is a good-sized novel.

Literally every sex scene is exactly the same. This story is pretty well written, but is antagonizingly boring. I'm ending my reading of it here and not bothering to continue the remaining chapters. Put some variations into your stories, your a good writer.

I scored this a 3 whereas I gave all of the others a 5 because I liked the main character and storyline; however, this chapter reads like all the others - the only difference is the name of the man w/the penis.

Maybe you're stuck in a rut?

I agree with willeriley, almost every sex scene is more or less the same. That does not, however, detract from the greatness of the story. I do hope the next few stories have some variety, but if not, its not that great a deal.

loved it