All Comments on 'Angel, Stripped Ch. 03'

The incorporation of several fetishes in this chapter not only reads well but is a huge turn-on. Explaining Nyotaimori is fascinating. Who would've guessed they would learn something by reading erotica? Thanks for the very useful education and another chapter that keeps my fingers wet.

Educational, fun, full of life. There are some places were I think your editor might have let you down; places where things get out of sequence or aren't explained fully, and I'm not crazy about feet. But the over all story, and most of the details, are just fantastic!

this comment is for the entire series

I am kinda at a loss. The first two chapters building up to a very erotic delicate strong earthy explosion

I knew where you were headed but you sure took road not traveled.

didnt much go for the ice cream finish, I think (not sure) I would have let things drift to a more mellow loving end. But it is your story not mine and as I have nothing for you to look at take it as you will.