All Comments on 'Angela'

Another great job. I hope you keep writing and look forward to your submissions.

One of the best stories I've read for ages. Full of detail of objects and character and place, perfectly combined, and with it romantic and tragic.

Why is it that lesbian romance have to be so damn tragic all the time? I like your writing style, though.

Really nice story, as always. I hope there will be a sequel... :)

Wonderful love story, Des. Bravo!

I loved it. It's always so nice when there is a story line leading up to the climax. Please keep up the good work.

Just beautifully written. Very well done.

A great story! The characters are distinct and well developed, there is a strong storyline, the sex scene is well done, no spelling errors (although there are a few punctuation problems) and you treat the characters well - a first rate story!

I liked the way Mia seems to change by the end of the story. It might have been nice to have a final scene with them walking hand-in-hand into the school (or something like that - a cliche, but I like it) to demonstrate Mia's moving beyond her previous small-mindedness. But that's a small point and is probably a personal taste kind of thing.

I'm a sucker for someone recognizing "The awful daring of a moment's surrender / which an age of prudence can never retract" and then taking that life-changing step.

It was nice that the story built to the sex, even though that meant putting it at the end of a long story. Generally if there is a hot sex scene in the first few paragraphs I know I'm not going to like it! There are exceptions, of course, but that's my opinion.

I was totally inviolved in your story. Please give us more of this story. I can't wait for the next installment.

Thank you for sharing your talent.

Please make sequal with same characters. It was awesome. I read it more then once, not because of the porn but because it was such a great write. Instant message me sometime, DarkestEternity@aol and @aim. great write. keep it up.

your story made me feel the emotions that mia and ang went through. it was perfect. it drew me in and i could see their world crisply as i read,..... please make a chapter 2 with the same characters,.... maybe with mia lossing her stupid friends and being openly lesbian, u can e-mail me at bulltech17@yahoo.com

?although the fact that I spent the last two pages fantasizing about breaking Joey's legs with a tire iron did somewhat kill the romantic mood.(Also, Angela's "tea-colored" eyes became "honey-colored" later on, which I wouldn't have noticed if "tea-colored" hadn't been the first sentence, and thus memorable. Still, nice work.)

Intresting characters and a good dramatic story.

Wow this story was fantastic, I really enjoyed reading it. I could not believe how involved I got in the story. It was amazing!!! I hope this author will continue the good work. I look foreword to reading more great stories by destinie21.

I know, sweet must not be what you can call all the tragic part of your story, but the way you wrote it, taking great care making your readers actually feel what your caracters are felling, and the "tact" you used to make them interact, appart from (that prick of) Joey, quite made me forget about him, eventhough, now Mia and Angela have made their first move, teaching him a little lesson for would be great...

Even without the sex scene, your story would have been great, just by the "wanting in their eyes".

Plus this sex scene is the one that seems to put an end to the story, and as I said I would have gladly went on reading it.

But it's your "baby", so I guess I must be thankful that you shared it with us, and a lot of other good stories. I'm looking forward to read more of them.

Thanks a lot,

Nessa.

This was such a sweet and touching story. I loved every moment of it...didn't even want it to end!

Not only a great erotica, but also a wonderful story.

Good job. Looking forward to reading more.

This is only the second destinie21 story I've read (I see there's another part which I'll start in a minute), but I'm hooked already and I know I'll end reading reading every last one of them. Right now I would actually pay to buy this, even at hardcover prices - Destinie21 must be the best writer on Literotica!

I loved this. I was an in depth story with a wonderful ending.

that was an amazing story really well written and I enjoyed it so much

this was just perfect..i love your work..damn reality it hurts..this work made me cry and fall in love...i love this one..my favorite..<3

Really good character development! Can’t believe any have it less.

I loved this story, it was perfect.

Its truly horrible that violence at all is part of our society and man against woman is pure crime, but then police investigators smoothly ingnoring such crime or talking it down, would they be such relaxed a.....h....s then the beaten face was they're own one?

So happy that students assignment bring such love together and joy