by MrBZarr
WHAT THE FUCK? I stoped reading when I hit page 10. You have a lot of imagination but there is a thing as too much. You went too far with this story. First you turned the women into animals. Then the second stage the the whole world was turned into hermaphrodite human-animal hybrids. That was just retarded. This story was such a let down I give you 0 stars.
Dude it's a fantasy get over it. I guess you didn't read animalkind cobra I think that they are both very good. So don't forget it's nonfiction witch means it's not real.
Whilst the sheer length can make it difficult to read in one sitting, it allows for your world and the relationships between characters become full fleshed out. I loved this story and hope that you continue.
just found you by this one and had to binge read both stories, would love to write something for it but my skill in that part are lacking badly hope to read more of this universe soon
Please get an editor to proof read your stories, it will also help you with your English. Keep writing great stories!
An excellent second chapter in this world looking forward to part three! Keep up the good work.
What do you think of a ferret or weasel based story? I ... kinda want to write one ...
I really love this story, it touched my heart in more ways than one, I love the characters, the universe, and most of all the love. Thank you for the story 😊