All Comments on 'Anna von Kleev Ch. 04: Unconsummated'

The way you tell the story is fantastic, I love it. If this could be written down on parchment and hidden away in some old English castle, to be found at some later time, you could change English history.

Not the first wedding night that nothing happened I suspect.

The plan so cleverly laid out and brilliantly executed, and yet ...

We shall see whether the result was indeed a failure or on the contrary, the greatest triumph and best outcome Pippa could hope for.

Dr B; What can I say Pixie, just brilliant, how you blend and weave the plotting and Machiavellian manoeuvring behind the scenes of Henry's court with a horny, but tender sexy scene between Anne and her Lady-in-Waiting and how you have, just by coincidence introduced, the sad, doomed, Katherine Howard, beheaded at eighteen. You, my girl have a great talent, I've made this comment before, but if you ever publish a proper book, I for one would purchase it. Five star's do not do it justice, can't wait for part five

This was a story that just begged for the Pixiehoff treatment - and what a wonderful treatment Pixiehoff has administered!!! My entire being is immersed in the environments, the characters, and the drama. (And the hot lesbian sex of course.) Pippa is amazing as Pixiehoff’s avatar.: So cerebral and sexual. Wonderful!!! I can’t wait to see how Pippa navigates the perilous waters ahead. (That was quite a cliffhanger of an ending to this chapter). 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

OUTSTANDING is the word that describes this 5 Star chapter. And just the right amount of drama as always. Your take on history with the spicy sexual overtures is what makes your adventures Top Shelf Entertainment. Make my day when I see a new chapter pop on my screen. Thank you for the entertainment you bring to so many. Blessings and Cheers.

Simply captivating, suspenseful piece of this story with wonderful wit and satire. What is really meant by “nothing” — surely something more than the impression we have at closing. So intriguing.

I suspect not, Bobbi - so glad that you are enjoying it so much xxxxx

Thank you so much, darling Amadeus. I am keeping as close to the facts as we know them, but of course, some of those "facts" are known only to the two people involved, which leaves me room for fun xxxxx

Thank you so much Dr B. How are you getting on? I am glad that you are enjoying this so much xxxxx

Thank you, Anon, keep the popcorn coming, as Pippa has a perilous course ahead of her. I am so pleased that you are enjoying this xxxxx

Thank you, Qwer, it is good to be back, and I am grateful to you and others for your appreciation xxxxx

Thank you Migbird. As you know, I do like to leave you all with a cliffhanger - more to come xxxxx

A very entertaining history lesson. I have no doubt that with the exception of the character Pippa this is pretty much how events panned out, both before and on the wedding night. It is events that unfolded after the disastrous wedding night that intrigue me and I am all agog to learn of dear Pixie's take on it. Cromwell's card is now well and truly marked and Norfolk and Sussex will no doubt be conspiring against him. Five stars are well deserved.

Thank you so much, Alice. The next chapter will reveal where this goes from Pippa's point of view xxxxx

I came to this chapter late thanks to unseasonal weather having caused a power outage here. But the wait was worth it. Your take on actual recorded historical events is absolutely brilliant, Pixie. No one is fooled by your having changed Pixie to Pippa though! What a wonderful commentator she is. And how Machiavellian too. 5 stars just for the "you don't have to look at the mantlepiece whilst poking the fire" saying. And I can't wait for the next chapter.

Your comments always bring a smile to my face, darling - and yes, of course, we all know who Pippa is :) I am so glad that you are enjoying this so much xxxxx

As spectacular as expected, bravo Pixie

Amazing as always Pixie. I love how you take a historical event or a time and weave a believable story out of it.

I'm off to brush up on my English history as I know who Henry the VIII was and he had a bunch of wives but that's about it.

5/5

J

Thank you, Aoife xxxxx

Thank you so much, J. I have tried to stick as close to what happened as possible, but somehow Pippa makes the outcome more believable than the official version xxxxx

A captivating chapter with intrigue, cunning wit, and a delightful sexual interlude!

Perfect ending to keep us wondering.

5 stars!

Thank you so much. Paul 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💋

Now I know Why Thomas Cromwell

Dear Pixie,

Via multiple sources, Thomas Cromwell's wife, Elizabeth, and their two daughters, Anne and Grace, died during an epidemic of "sweating sickness" in 1528 or 1529, and Thomas Cromwell never re-married.

So why did you give Thomas Cromwell a second wife?

However, very clever of you to rename the main character of this story, and a sad future for Thomas Cromwell because of Anna and King Henry VIII.

Despite my above comments, I do like this story-series, because I can follow it via history.

Above all Pixie, A Blessed / Happy / Easter 💒⛪to you and June.

And of course, 5 ⭐😍🪄🤩💫for this wonderful story-series.

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Dr B; Thank you Pixie, for your kind word's, I'm getting on well. As you know after my surgery, I did not feel that I was still a woman, (womb, ovaries, the lot), to be honest, I felt abnormal, but my Macmillan nurse put me in touch with a support group of similar women and it's been a `game-changer'. I feel much better mentally, getting there psychically and I spend most of my day's with my grand-daughter, ( best therapy there is, she's crawling now, can't wait until she walks and talks). Now, ladies and gent's, if you want to avoid what I have been through, HPV induced Cancer, get tested, have your children vaccinated and they are safe. OXOXO I hope that your own medical issues are over and we soon see Robin and Pippa (the Pixie clone back).

It just gets better! What can I say?

Congratulations🥳🎉🎊 Pixie,

Dear Pixie,

Congratulations Pixie on achieving 1,300 Literotica Followers, and that’s a 5.26% increase of faithful followers, that truly enjoy 🤩 & love 😍 your Pixie magic 🪄that flows from creative mind 💭 onto paper via your enchanted Pen ✒️🖋️🖊️✏️ since 31 DEC 23.

Above all Pixie, I wish you & June, a very Blessed and Spiritual Easter weekend. For I know God looks after you both; especially, you Pixie, because I believe that God ⛪💒 signed-up as a faithful Pixie Literotica follower ⭐🤩🌟😍💫.

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I don't think I did give Cromwell a second wife?

Thank you Dr B and that is good news. I am a lot better and enjoying being back writing 🌟🌟🌟🥂🌟

Thank you so much, Claire xxxxx

Thank you, Jeff xxxxx

Tardy as is my want these days. My apologies, my daughter.

Another wonderful chapter, I would expect nothing else, you build the suspense and weave in drama. Very good, as always. I even know how this turns out, and I am still worried about Anna! Poor thing. I will keep my opinions of the King to myself, but I am very much Team Anna and Pippa. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ and my ❤️

Thank you so much Mama - so glad you are enjoying it xxxxx

Another great chapter, the suspense keeps building. A wonderful read so far!

Thank you so much, Wag xxxxx

Oh my...What and how a lady of your choosing and preferred softer, more beautiful female sex comes up with this line, is as interesting and entertaining as your stories. Again, you make me laugh with such great one liners.... " "Was my lord king perhaps thinking that he did not need to look at the chimney when he was poking the fire?" Well done Lady Pixie of the PIppa's. Oh yes, and Pippa's political skills are as keen as any Pixie I have known * soft smile *

As ever, you make me smile, gentle squire xxxxx