All Comments on 'Anne's Anal Lesson'

by SueDanym

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Much too short

Got to cock in ass with little before it. Foreplay. Dirty talk. etc.

NellskitchenNellskitchenover 5 years ago
SueDanym hits us hard...

...hard enough to retain a reader's attention as she puts her anal adventure on parade, her lover, her husband, her everything, seeing to everything she desires, while never losing the crucial connection with him. A moving story of a simple sex act gone orgasmic. Nellskitchen

Crusader235Crusader235over 5 years ago
Foreplay?

A vibrating, rotating, Butt Plug, in her for several minutes was all the foreplay she needed. Very well done in 750 words! That is one happy wife & husband. Five Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ugly

You NEVER leave someone alone in her position. First rule of BDSM. I wonder how long it will take her to realize that her husband is simply using her. I had to laugh at the comments that complained this was too short. Did they not notice it was submitted under the 750 word challenge? Too funny for words.

Crusader235Crusader235over 5 years ago
Foreplay?

She Loved Anal. I think a new vibrating, rotating, buttplug, stuck in her ass for awhile was as the foreplay she needed. Fucking Hot short story. Five Stars!

HappilyLockedManHappilyLockedManover 5 years ago
A Fine Short Story

Wow! Every word moved the story along to it's ass fucking tightly bound climax. That was great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Didactic masterpiece

If Sue gets tired of curing patients, she will be welcomed as a professor at any of the country’s elite medical schools. This is an example of how she’ll hold the attention of her classes. She could have just written that research data shows sex with toys may be good, but a loving partner is much more satisfying. Instead, she illustrated her lecture with a dramatic anecdote that made sure nobody will miss her point.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
The entirety of SueDanym's story...

... is as torridly-written as this single passage: "Locking eyes with her tormentor, Anne conveyed love and a desire for more." Want more? Want an instant and enduring erotic high? Read Anne's Anal Lesson. A.S.

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110almost 5 years ago
How to convey such lust in 750 words?

Well done! A total turn on! 5*s

HartMannHartMannover 4 years ago
Wow, so hot....

As Obelix (from the cartoon) said: The best ones are the small ones.

Incredibly hot.

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 3 years ago
Bravo!

Very Hot short story, wow! ;->

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