All Comments on 'Anniversary Ch. 06'

to be part of the ending aw well

What has this story got to do with the "ANNIVERSARY"?????

sounds good tho keep writing

Would love to hear more on this. It's been a long time, but you've done that before. More please.

I have enjoyed your other stuff, but the fact is that these characters did not take over, except for Daren. The long breaks must have pointed you down a red herring trail. This being said, I am greatly encouraged by chapter 6. It has a Lot of potential. Hope life finds you well. You have written too many 5 * stories to stop now. Thanks!

This story has grown. From easy developed sex adventures of Aurora until a possible showdown with a gangster cartel. This last development could be handled with hypnosis as a weapon. Hubert, the banker could be involved. He could have knowledge of things he is wanting to share (to get his competition competition defeated). Perhaps a reprogramming of Aurora and Julie, to become some 'Charlies Angels' with a proper combat training. Sex and hypnosis would be an important part of course.

Just some loose ideas.