All Comments on 'Anniversary Shopping'

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BriteaseBriteasealmost 9 years ago
Good ending

Got you a 5

LimeyracerLimeyraceralmost 9 years ago
LOVED IT...

Good, and unexpected twist at the end...enjoyed it immensely..5 stars...

impo_61impo_61almost 9 years ago
A good LW story...but...

A good LW story...but he showed he loved very much his wife to cheat on her...The other woman had to be his wife...3*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Deja Vu

This sounds too good to be true, but it mirrors an experience I had years ago.

Great read, and I had a hint of the ending. Well written.

stillaonewomanmstillaonewomanmalmost 9 years ago
Now that was sweet

Very, very sweet indeed. And no infidelity. At least in the usual way. Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nice idea, poorly done

We all got the twist half way through, so why then spell it out? Credit your readers with some intelligence.

And it's not Loving wives ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Cute story.

Thanks!

TigerladyandhimTigerladyandhimalmost 9 years ago
Great story

Really enjoyed the characters and the twist at the end

KevinandNinaKevinandNinaalmost 9 years ago
Nicely written but somewhat predictable

Like some others have mentioned, I saw the ending coming as soon as you described the blond woman in the shop.

That aside, well written and enjoyable.

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Fun Story

That was an enjoyable story. What it is all about having fun with your wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice Touch

Very nice story, with the plot twist at the end having fun with his wife, it was good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice story

Love the stories where the husband and wife have fun together. Yes, the ending could be seen coming, but it was still well written. I do like wife with raised eyebrows at the sales girl's actions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot!

A nice, naughty & hot little story. Got a hard on that needs to be taken care of :p Keep it up...

Captain MidnightCaptain Midnightover 7 years ago
That... is... SO ... cute!

I wonder if somehow I guessed it would turn out this way, because of the category? Delightful!

OGHMNWOGHMNWabout 6 years ago
Great Story

This is a Wonderful Hot Erotic story and I love the way they celebrate their anniversary together. 😘😘😘

penneydog55penneydog55about 6 years ago
As

Maxwell Smart would say? A-Ha the old married to each other trick and the sales Girl was heard saying as he left the shop "Missed it by that much"

Honestly if You know someone who suffer from Erectile Disfunction? For Fucks Sake get him to read the story. His Erection problem Fixed (Who needs Viagra)

This Story can Make a Dead Corpse crack a fat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thats my comment 5★ WOOF!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcalmost 2 years ago

Saw it coming, but still a fun read! 5*

nyteramblernyterambleralmost 2 years ago

Oh yes knew what was coming but good story for sure.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[16.09.22]

Cliched and saw it cuming a mile away. but still very Sweet und Romantique!

11/10 Red Men's Thongs!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Cute story. Who cares if it was predictable. He loves his wife and she loves him and they did sexy things. The end.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Sweet story of a loving couple. Yeah it was predictable. Still fun. It is called love.

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