All Comments on 'Another Chance'

amazing! So glad this was posted today, I needed something to kick-start my day. ;-) i think this is my favorite so far...keep writing because I really can't wait to read more.

<3 Calie

A couple of times you referred to a Chloe instead of one of the girls but well done

i love this story. please write more. please!!!!!

more please............continue story...........write about meagan having a baby.

That was abosoluty amazing ! Write more please

This was awesome! You should continue it!!!

Tis bin long since I read a lovely story like this. Great Job.

Love the story wish there was a part 2 :)

Aww very nice story. Made me smile then made me cry then made me smile again.

Beautiful story. Wish it were longer.

I really enjoyed this story. That said, while your plot and character development were good, your grammar could use some help. Still, it was a good story, thank you for sharing it with us!

...... And it never fails to make me cry like silly. Love this story.

A pleasant short story but you have a tendency to mix your tenses. Also one of the women changed into 'Chloe' a couple of times. I assume you meant one character to be 'Chloe' then changed your mind. And I'm afraid Jacob's dialogue was just a little too twee. I know he's supposed to be only two years old but a lot of two-year-olds can talk better than that. Still, an enjoyable little read.

Aww sweet story. Loved it.

Simplistic. Beautiful.