by qualitywheat
Surely you had a better label for your story! I enjoyed your story and hope there will be additional chapters! In fact, I’ll be looking for those chapters!
Your writing is getting better all the time. Tighter, more descriptive, hotter. Keep it up. Heh.
OMG I loved this story give me more please and thank you!!
Has a beautiful & sexy wife and now loses her.
Hope he enjoys getting SLOPPY SECOND,
-- lewis hamilton's on-again-off-again girlfriend and former PUSSYCAT DOLLS --- simple, easily verified, facts that, if wrong, can ruin a story for me ... you lost me at the first page